Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート
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Part 1
試験官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
受験者
I like getting chocolate like everyone, but I'm not prefer to eat in chocolate because that's really unhealthy and that's really a lot of process, sugar and etcetera and artificial. And I don't like eating Shepherd. I'm not pre. This is not my prefer.
試験官
How often do you eat chocolate?
受験者
Just one time in a month because this is my period, this relationship with my period actually. And the other days I'm not, I'm not preferred to eating chocolate. I just use, I eat generally protein bar and I do homemade chocolate without sugar. I just prefer to eat this kind of stuff, not chocolate.
試験官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
受験者
No, I'm not a big fan of chocolate. I'm this not sweet things. I I don't have a sweet tooth, but I was child. I like, umm, savory things like chips and homemade food. I'm not big fan of chocolate and sugar things now. Yeah, but continue like that.
試験官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
受験者
Because the taste is really good, they generally almost every pupil have a sweet tooth. So this is the so this is so basic things to each sweet things actually. But I'm not preferred just chocolate. But again, if I choose something with a sweet.
試験官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
受験者
I'm gonna choose specific one, but if I eat chocolate I want to add some nuts in here in in it because I don't like normal chocolate. Never. If I eat chocolate I want different kind of stuff and eat it.
試験官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
受験者
Umm yes and no. Because chocolate is not good gifts. I prefer to flowers because chocolate is so specific that everyone has a different kind of umm, taste. And chocolate is not basic. There's lots of option.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
スコア: 40.0提案: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "I like chocolate, but I prefer not to eat it often because it is unhealthy and contains a lot of processed sugar and artificial ingredients." gibi daha net ve doğrudan cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları ve anlamsız ifadeleri azaltmalısınız.
例: I like chocolate like many people, but I prefer not to eat it often because it contains a lot of sugar and artificial ingredients, which are unhealthy.
How often do you eat chocolate?
スコア: 50.0提案: Cümlenizi daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla desteklemelisiniz. Örneğin, "I eat chocolate only once a month because it relates to my period. On other days, I prefer protein bars or homemade sugar-free chocolate." gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutmalısınız.
例: I eat chocolate only once a month because it is related to my period. On other days, I prefer to eat protein bars or homemade sugar-free chocolate.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
スコア: 45.0提案: Cümlelerinizi daha düzgün ve akıcı hale getirmelisiniz. Örneğin, "No, I was not a big fan of chocolate as a child because I don't have a sweet tooth. I preferred savory snacks like chips and homemade food." gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız.
例: No, I was not a big fan of chocolate as a child because I don't have a sweet tooth. I preferred savory snacks like chips and homemade food.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
スコア: 40.0提案: Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla desteklemelisiniz. Örneğin, "Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes good and many people have a sweet tooth. However, I don't prefer chocolate specifically, but I like sweet things in general." gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.
例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes good and many people have a sweet tooth. However, I don't prefer chocolate specifically, but I like sweet things in general.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
スコア: 50.0提案: Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmalısınız. Örneğin, "I don't have a specific favorite flavor, but if I eat chocolate, I prefer it with nuts because I don't like plain chocolate." gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutmalısınız.
例: I don't have a specific favorite flavor, but if I eat chocolate, I prefer it with nuts because I don't like plain chocolate.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
スコア: 45.0提案: Cevabınızı daha net ve akıcı yapmalısınız. Örneğin, "I think chocolate can be a good gift, but not always. I prefer flowers because people have different tastes, and chocolate comes in many varieties." gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.
例: I think chocolate can be a good gift, but not always. I prefer flowers because people have different tastes, and chocolate comes in many varieties.
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