Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
受験者
I like eating chocolate but it's too sweet for me, especially white chocolate, and I'm on a diet right now so I prefer eating dark dark chocolate with 70 or more percent of real chocolate. But actually I like white chocolate so much.
試験官
How often do you eat chocolate?
受験者
I would like to eat chocolate every day, but I limit myself and I eaten just once or twice a week. So that's really good result for me because in the past I might eat chocolate every day or twice so the week.
試験官
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
受験者
Not really. My parents were limiting me in eating sweets and uh, actually I'm thankful for them, uh, because now I don't eat uh, as many sweets as my friends eat, but sometimes I really want to eat some milk chocolate.
試験官
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
受験者
I think it's one of the most common sweets in our life and you can add chocolate to every sweet you want. For example, you can eat the ice cream with chocolate or some cakes and cheesecakes with chocolate, eggless with chocolate, and it's really sweet and it tastes good.
試験官
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
受験者
I enjoy eating white chocolate with yogurt but also sometimes I eat it with coconut or banana. But actually I prefer classic milk white or black chocolate.
試験官
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
受験者
I think it depends on which chocolate you give. So for example, if you just give a bar of chocolate, it's not so good as a gift. But if you have bought, uh, chocolate candies with some filling and uh, it tastes uh, really good and interesting, why not?
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
スコア: 70.0提案: Ваш ответ немного длинный и содержит повторения, например, "dark dark chocolate". Старайтесь использовать более естественные и краткие выражения, избегая излишней детализации, если она не нужна. Также улучшите связность, используя связующие слова.
例: Yes, I like eating chocolate, especially dark chocolate with a high cocoa content because it's less sweet. Although I enjoy white chocolate, I try to avoid it since I'm on a diet.
How often do you eat chocolate?
スコア: 65.0提案: В вашем ответе есть грамматические ошибки и некоторая неясность. Используйте правильные времена и избегайте повторов. Также старайтесь строить предложения логично и связно, используя вводные слова.
例: I would like to eat chocolate every day, but I limit myself to once or twice a week. This is an improvement because in the past I used to eat it more often.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
スコア: 75.0提案: Избегайте использования междометий, таких как "uh", чтобы сделать речь более плавной. Также старайтесь использовать более точные выражения и связывать предложения логично.
例: Not really. My parents limited my sweets intake, and I'm thankful because now I eat fewer sweets than my friends. However, sometimes I still crave milk chocolate.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
スコア: 60.0提案: Ваш ответ содержит некоторые ошибки и нечеткие выражения, например, "eggless with chocolate". Старайтесь использовать более точные и разнообразные слова, а также связывать идеи с помощью союзов.
例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it is a common sweet that can be added to many desserts, such as ice cream, cakes, and cheesecakes. Its sweet taste makes it enjoyable for many people.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
スコア: 70.0提案: Ответ немного запутан из-за смешения вкусов и терминов. Старайтесь структурировать ответ, четко выделяя предпочтения и используя правильные названия.
例: My favourite flavour is classic milk chocolate, but I also enjoy white chocolate combined with yogurt, coconut, or banana.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
スコア: 65.0提案: Избегайте междометий и старайтесь строить предложения более формально и связно. Также используйте более точные выражения для описания предпочтений.
例: It depends on the type of chocolate. A simple chocolate bar may not be a great gift, but filled chocolate candies are tasty and make interesting presents.
文法
× I limit myself and I eaten just once or twice a week.
✓ I limit myself and I have eaten just once or twice a week.
The verb 'eaten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. The correct form is 'have eaten' to indicate an action that happened at an unspecified time before now.
× because in the past I might eat chocolate every day or twice so the week.
✓ because in the past I might have eaten chocolate every day or twice a week.
The modal verb 'might' followed by a past action requires the perfect infinitive form 'have eaten' to indicate possibility in the past. Also, 'so the week' is incorrect; it should be 'a week'.
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