Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь выразить свои мысли более чётко и логично, избегая лишних слов и повторов. Например, объясните, почему вы не любите шоколад, используя простые и понятные предложения.

例: No, I don't like eating chocolate very much because I prefer to save it for special occasions. Also, I think eating too much chocolate is not healthy.

提案: Ответ не ясен и содержит бессвязные фразы. Старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя простые предложения и указывая конкретную частоту.

例: I eat chocolate about twice a week, usually on weekends or special occasions.

提案: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить связность и добавить немного деталей. Используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

例: Yes, when I was a child, I used to eat chocolate every day after dinner because I really loved its sweet taste.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит повторения и посторонние слова. Старайтесь отвечать прямо, используя связные предложения и объясняя причины популярности шоколада.

例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and delicious, and many people enjoy it as a treat.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и непонятные слова. Постарайтесь использовать правильные слова и выражать свои предпочтения чётко и понятно.

例: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate because it is smooth and sweet.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Сформулируйте своё мнение ясно и используйте простые предложения.

例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because many people like it and it shows you care about them.

× No, I don't really like eating chocolate because I always want to save it and healthier if I eat chocolate.

✓ No, I don't really like eating chocolate because I always want to save it and be healthier if I eat chocolate.

The sentence lacks the verb 'be' before 'healthier' to form a correct predicate. The phrase 'and healthier' is incomplete without a verb. Adding 'be' corrects the present tense structure.

× Taste that man again.

✓ I don't like the taste that much.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence structure error. Rewriting it with a subject and verb clarifies the meaning.

× Umm, of course I think kissing. Think how often do each I eat chocolate twice a week.

✓ Umm, of course I think about it. I eat chocolate twice a week.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. It lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. Rephrasing provides a clear and grammatically correct response.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to eat chocolate every day after a dinner because I really love chocolate.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to eat chocolate every day after dinner because I really loved chocolate.

The verb 'love' should be in the past tense 'loved' to match the past context indicated by 'used to' and 'was a child'. Also, 'a dinner' is incorrect; 'dinner' is uncountable here.

× Because of its tests. Tests. And. What's about Denver? Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world? I think chocolate is popular because of its sweet.

✓ Because of its taste. I think chocolate is popular because it is sweet.

'Tests' is a misspelling of 'taste'. 'Sweet' is an adjective and needs to be used with 'it is' to form a correct sentence. The original sentence is fragmented and unclear.

× I think for me sneakers is my favorite flower of chocolate because it's flower is better than anyone.

✓ I think for me Snickers is my favorite flavor of chocolate because its flavor is better than any other.

'Sneakers' should be 'Snickers' (a chocolate brand). 'Flower' is a misspelling of 'flavor'. 'It's flower' should be 'its flavor' (possessive pronoun). 'Better than anyone' is incorrect; it should be 'better than any other' to compare flavors.

× I think it is good when we when people gifted to other people, gifted chocolate as a second effect.

✓ I think it is good when people give chocolate as a gift to others as a secondary effect.

The original sentence is confusing and contains redundant words. 'Gifted to other people, gifted chocolate' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and clearer structure.