Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, absolutely. I love singing because it's one of my favorite hobbies and it just gives me energy whenever I'm feeling bored and annoyed.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
I have never taken a course for singing, but I've tried at home for fun.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
Well, since I don't think that I have a beautiful and good voice for singing, I would just try to sing for my friends, like the close ones or just like my brothers because they'd be the only ones to hear my bad voice.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, absolutely, without a doubt, 'cause when you try to sing, especially when you are singing your favorite song, it will give you some chill, some energy and it will bring you some happiness as well, 'cause I've tried it myself and all the single time that I'm every single time that I try singing, it just give me a lot of happiness and energy.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 85.0提案: Your answer is natural and clear, but it could be more concise and avoid redundancy. Try to limit your response to 3-4 sentences and use more varied vocabulary to express your feelings about singing.
例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it's a favorite hobby of mine. It energizes me and lifts my mood whenever I feel bored or upset.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 90.0提案: Your answer is direct and clear, but you could enrich it by adding a linking phrase and a bit more detail to make it more engaging.
例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I often practice singing at home just for fun to improve my skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is honest but a bit long and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas with linking words and avoid repeating the same point. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your thoughts.
例: Since I don't consider my voice very good, I prefer to sing only for close friends and my brothers, as they are the ones who would appreciate it despite my imperfections.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is quite repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid repeating the same phrases. Also, focus on clear and correct sentence structures.
例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because when I sing my favorite songs, it energizes me and lifts my spirits. From my experience, singing always makes me feel joyful and refreshed.
文法
× it just give me a lot of happiness and energy
✓ it just gives me a lot of happiness and energy
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