Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

例: I don't like singing because I'm not good at it and my voice isn't very pleasant. Also, I feel nervous when I sing in front of my friends or family.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，句子结构不够自然。建议减少重复，使用连贯的句子，并且注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I started learning to play the piano when I was 13. I really enjoy watching pianists perform in theaters because I find it wonderful and inspiring.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和代词，明确表达感激之情。

例: I want to sing for my teacher because he has helped me a lot whenever I faced problems. He always gave me advice to solve my biggest difficulties.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且更清晰地表达观点。

例: Absolutely. Many people around me like singing, and when they feel tired or bored, they often sing for a long time. I think singing helps them relax and feel happier.

× my voice are not are not beautiful

✓ my voice is not beautiful

主语是单数名词“voice”，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”，而不是复数形式“are”。

× I was afraid to sing and with my friends or my family, which can make me make me feel nervous.

✓ I was afraid to sing with my friends or my family, which made me feel nervous.

“was afraid to sing and with my friends or my family”结构不正确，应去掉“and”，且后半句时态应与前半句一致，使用过去时“made”。

× I have learnt playing piano when I was 13.

✓ I learnt to play the piano when I was 13.

“have learnt”与具体过去时间“when I was 13”不搭配，应使用一般过去时“learnt”。“learnt playing piano”搭配不当，应改为“learnt to play the piano”。

× I really like watching some pianist playing the piano on the theater.

✓ I really like watching some pianists playing the piano in the theater.

“pianist”应为复数“pianists”，表示多个钢琴家；“on the theater”应改为“in the theater”，表示在剧院内。

× I want to sing for my teacher because they help me a lot where where I was in trouble he always gave gave me some methods to solve and he tell me some way to solve the biggest problem in my life.

✓ I want to sing for my teacher because he helps me a lot. When I was in trouble, he always gave me some methods to solve problems and told me some ways to solve the biggest problems in my life.

“teacher”是单数，代词应为“he”而非“they”；动词时态和形式需调整以符合语境；句子结构需拆分以表达清晰。

× Absolutely there were. There are many people around me like saying and when they get tired or they feel boring, they always choose to sing for a long time.

✓ Absolutely, there are many people around me who like singing, and when they get tired or feel bored, they always choose to sing for a long time.

“there were”时态不合适，应为现在时“there are”；“like saying”应为“like singing”；“feel boring”应为“feel bored”，形容词用法错误。