Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免使用不恰当的连接词。

例: Yes, I like singing because I think I have a good voice and it makes me feel happy in my daily life.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，清楚说明学习唱歌的经历和效果。

例: Yes, I took two singing lessons last year, and they helped me improve my skills a lot.

提案: 回答中语法和用词错误较多，表达不够自然。建议直接说明想为自己唱歌的原因，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: I want to sing for myself because singing makes me happy and improves my mood.

提案: 回答缺乏具体内容，表达不够连贯。建议直接回答问题并给出理由，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and enjoy themselves in daily life.

× Actually, last year I mentioned how to sing songs, but I don't have learnt too much time, just two lessons and it did improve my skills.

✓ Actually, last year I learned how to sing songs, but I didn't have much time, just two lessons and it did improve my skills.

这里“have learnt”用法错误，应该用一般过去时“learned”，因为句子描述的是过去发生的动作。"don't have learnt"结构不正确，应该用过去时态"didn't have"。建议使用一般过去时表达过去的经历。

× The man I want to sing for is myself because I think sing songs can make me happy and boost my sense of happiness.

✓ The person I want to sing for is myself because I think singing songs can make me happy and boost my sense of happiness.

“The man”不一定准确，且“sing songs”缺少动名词形式，应改为“singing songs”。“myself”用法正确，但整体表达更自然应使用“person”。建议注意代词和动词形式的正确使用。

× The man I want to sing for is myself because I think sing songs can make me happy and boost my sense of happiness.

✓ The person I want to sing for is myself because I think singing songs can make me happy and boost my sense of happiness.

动词“sing”在此处作为动名词使用，应加-ing形式“singing”。这是动词+ing形式的典型用法。建议熟悉动词后接动名词的规则。