Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I actually like singing. It's like a type of art where you can express your emotions and feelings. Umm, it's so. It's such a beautiful art. I like doing it and practicing it when I'm in my free time.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Umm, no, but I just watch many people sing and I'm trying to copy them and do the same as they try. And yeah, I'm trying my best.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I would like to sing for my mom, a lovely song where I can express much. I love her and I respect her and yeah.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Of course, as I said, it's a type of art that you can express your emotions and feelings by it. Many people feel happy when they sing and dance. I also believe that there's many type of arts, but one of them is singing.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 75.0提案: حاول تكون إجاباتك أكثر تنظيمًا وطبيعية، وتجنب التكرار والكلمات غير الضرورية مثل "Umm". حاول تعطي جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم تدعمها بتفاصيل محددة ومترابطة.
例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions creatively. I find it a beautiful art form, and I often practice singing during my free time to improve my skills.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 65.0提案: حاول تعطي إجابة أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، وتجنب الكلمات غير الضرورية مثل "Umm" و"And yeah". استخدم روابط لتوضيح أفكارك بشكل أفضل.
例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I watch many singers and try to imitate their style to improve my singing. I am doing my best to learn by practicing regularly.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 70.0提案: حاول تكون إجابتك أكثر اكتمالًا وتنظيمًا، وتجنب الكلمات غير الضرورية مثل "and yeah". استخدم جمل مترابطة لتوضيح مشاعرك بشكل أفضل.
例: I would like to sing a beautiful song for my mother to express my love and respect for her. Singing for her would be a special way to show my appreciation.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 70.0提案: حاول تستخدم روابط بين الجمل لتجعل إجابتك أكثر ترابطًا، وكن أكثر تحديدًا في التفاصيل التي تقدمها لتدعم رأيك.
例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions freely. Many enjoy singing and dancing, which lifts their mood and creates joy. Singing is one of the many art forms that positively affect people's feelings.
文法
× I would like to sing for my mom, a lovely song where I can express much.
✓ I would like to sing a lovely song for my mom where I can express a lot.
The word 'much' is incorrectly used here as a quantifier without a noun. The correct quantifier to express a large amount in this context is 'a lot'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by placing 'a lovely song' immediately after 'sing' to clarify the object of singing.
× I also believe that there's many type of arts, but one of them is singing.
✓ I also believe that there are many types of art, but one of them is singing.
The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is', which is singular, but it is incorrectly used with the plural noun 'many type of arts'. The correct form is 'there are' for plural subjects. Also, 'type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'many', and 'arts' is better as the uncountable noun 'art' in this context.
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