Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但有语法错误和拼写错误（如"Sending"应为"Singing"），且表达不够自然。建议注意拼写和语法，使用更地道的表达，如"Singing helps me relax and improve my mood when I feel stressed."

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and improve my mood when I am stressed from studying or work.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清（如"I was on the much pressure"，"I was master choose"），句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，注意时态和表达的准确性，使用连贯的连接词。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in high school because I was under a lot of pressure from my studies. Therefore, I decided to take singing lessons, which I found very interesting and relaxing.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有拼写错误（"Selling"应为"Singing"），且部分表达可以更自然。建议注意拼写，使用更流畅的连接词，使表达更连贯。

例: I would love to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters. Singing at family gatherings is a tradition, and I feel comfortable and relaxed performing in front of them. They often encourage me to pursue my passion for music.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（"Caraco"应为"karaoke"），且最后一句表达不够清晰。建议使用正确词汇，补充具体例子，使内容更丰富且连贯。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps express emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people enjoy singing in the shower or car, and karaoke is a popular activity that brings joy to many.

× Sending can release my pressure and make my mood flexible.

✓ Singing can release my pressure and make my mood flexible.

The word 'Sending' is incorrect here; the correct present participle form of the verb related to the context is 'Singing'. This is a spelling error that changes the meaning of the sentence.

× Yes, I had learned how to sing when I was in high school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in high school.

The past perfect tense 'had learned' is unnecessary here because the sentence does not require a past action completed before another past action. Simple past 'learned' is appropriate.

× At that time, I was on the much pressure in studies.

✓ At that time, I was under a lot of pressure in my studies.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect in this context; the correct preposition to express experiencing pressure is 'under'. Also, 'much pressure' is uncountable and should be 'a lot of pressure'.

× I was master choose a way to release my pressure, so I was going to take singing lessons.

✓ I was trying to choose a way to release my pressure, so I decided to take singing lessons.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I was master choose' is incorrect; it should be 'I was trying to choose' or 'I wanted to choose'. Also, 'was going to take' can be simplified to 'decided to take' for clarity.

× Selling for family gathering is a tradition and I feel comfortable and relaxed performing in front of them.

✓ Singing for family gatherings is a tradition and I feel comfortable and relaxed performing in front of them.

The word 'Selling' is a typo and should be 'Singing'. Also, 'family gathering' should be plural 'family gatherings' to indicate the general tradition.

× Many people sing in the shower or car to feel better, and Caraco is a fun activity that brings joy.

✓ Many people sing in the shower or car to feel better, and karaoke is a fun activity that brings joy.

The word 'Caraco' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'karaoke'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar issue, but correcting it improves clarity.