Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. For example, say "I enjoy singing because it makes me feel better." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel better and helps me relax.

提案: Use correct verb tenses and more natural phrasing. Instead of "I am never try it," say "I have never tried it."

例: No, I have never tried to learn how to sing.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and more details. For example, explain why he is your favorite artist.

例: I want to sing for Abadi Johar because he is my favorite artist and his music inspires me a lot.

提案: Try to organize your answer better using linking words and correct plural forms. For example, say "It depends on the type of music; there is happy music and sad music." Also, explain your opinion more clearly.

例: I think singing can bring happiness to people because happy music can lift their mood, while sad music can help them express their feelings.

× Yes, I enjoy when I sing because it make me feel better.

✓ Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel better.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the -ing form, so 'enjoy when I sing' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy singing'. Also, 'it make me feel better' has a subject-verb agreement error; 'it' requires 'makes'.

× Yes, I enjoy when I sing because it make me feel better.

✓ Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel better.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular present tense 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× No, I am never try it.

✓ No, I have never tried it.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'am never try'; the correct form is the present perfect 'have never tried' to express an experience up to now.

× That's based on the type of music there is a happy music and sad musics.

✓ That's based on the type of music; there is happy music and sad music.

The word 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form; 'musics' is incorrect. Also, 'a happy music' is incorrect because 'music' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.