Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达，例如将"I am a person who find on listening to music"改为"I enjoy listening to music"。同时避免重复和口头语，提升表达的流畅度。

例: Yes, I really like singing because I enjoy listening to music, and producing beautiful sounds helps me relieve stress from my daily challenges.

提案: 回答结构较好，但存在语法错误，如"This help me"应为"This helps me"。建议注意主谓一致，并适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I have never had a professional singing lesson, but I enjoy practising on my own. Usually, I listen to my favorite songs and try to follow the melody and tone carefully, which helps me improve my singing technique and makes the process more enjoyable.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，避免重复使用"like"，并明确表达意图。

例: I would like to sing for my friends when we go to karaoke because I believe my singing can bring them positive emotions.

提案: 回答中有过多的口头语和重复，句子结构复杂且不连贯。建议简化表达，去除多余词汇，使用更准确的词汇如"relax"替代"retrieve your stress"。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because listening to beautiful melodies makes people feel relaxed and helps reduce stress from daily life.

× I am a person who find on listening to music so like producing a beautiful sound will really relieve my stress from my daily, umm challenges.

✓ I am a person who finds listening to music and producing beautiful sounds really relieves my stress from my daily challenges.

主语是单数（a person），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“finds”。另外，'find on listening to music'表达不正确，应改为'finds listening to music'。'like producing a beautiful sound'应改为'and producing beautiful sounds'，使句子更通顺。

× This help me improve my singing technique and make the process more enjoyable.

✓ This helps me improve my singing technique and makes the process more enjoyable.

主语是单数的'this'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'helps'和'makes'，以保持主谓一致。

× I think I'm like having a good skill in singing will also like provide other people or positive emotion.

✓ I think having good singing skills will also provide other people with positive emotions.

'a good skill'应改为复数形式'skills'，因为通常说'singing skills'。'like'在此句中多余，应删除。'provide other people or positive emotion'结构不正确，应改为'provide other people with positive emotions'。

× when you like hear hearing some beautiful umm melody which umm you feel umm you will feel really relaxed and also enjoyable which can help you to retrieve your stress from your daily life.

✓ when you hear some beautiful melody, you will feel really relaxed and also enjoy it, which can help you relieve your stress from daily life.

'like hear hearing'表达重复且错误，应改为'see hear'。'enjoyable'是形容词，需改为动词'enjoy'以符合句意。'retrieve your stress'用词错误，应改为'relieve your stress'。