Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“dislike saying”应为“dislike singing”，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述你的感受。

例: I don't like singing very much because it requires a lot of skills, and I haven't had any professional lessons. However, when I was young, I enjoyed singing and often sang on the street when I felt happy.

提案: 回答不完整且含有重复和语法错误。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免重复词汇，并且清晰表达意思。可以用简单句子描述是否学过唱歌及相关经历。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally. But when I was a student, we had music classes where the teacher guided us to play songs and follow the rhythm.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，部分表达不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免语法错误，如“express loving for country”应为“express love for my country”。

例: I would like to sing for my country, China. There are many songs that express love for the country because it gives me strength and a sense of responsibility to grow.

提案: 回答中有很多语气词和不完整的句子，影响表达的流畅性。建议减少语气词，使用完整句子，并且更清晰地表达观点。

例: Yes, absolutely. Most songs can help release stress or sadness, but it also depends on the type of songs you listen to. Generally, many songs bring happiness to people.

× I dislike saying because the saying need a lot of skills and I didn't have a professional lesson for learning it.

✓ I dislike singing because singing needs a lot of skills and I didn't have a professional lesson for learning it.

这里'saying'应为'singing'，且主语'singing'是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'needs'。动词与主语数不一致导致语法错误。

× I didn't have a professional lesson for learning it.

✓ I didn't have a professional lesson to learn it.

'for learning'用法不当，应该用不定式'to learn'表示目的。

× I usually sing on the road if I'm very happy.

✓ I usually sing on the road when I'm very happy.

'if'表示条件，'when'更适合表示时间状语，表达习惯动作时用'when'更准确。

× Uh, never, uh, but I remember the when I was a student, it has the music class and the teacher will guide, guide us to play the song and we need to follow the rhythm, but.

✓ Uh, never, uh, but I remember when I was a student, there was a music class and the teacher would guide us to play the song and we needed to follow the rhythm.

过去时间描述应使用过去时态，'has'应改为'was'，'will'改为'would'，'need'改为'needed'，保持时态一致。

× it has the music class and the teacher will guide, guide us to play the song

✓ there was a music class and the teacher would guide us to play the song

描述存在某物时，英语中常用'there be'结构，且时态应与上下文一致。

× I would like to sing for my country China.

✓ I would like to sing for my country, China.

'China'作为同位语，应与前面的'country'用逗号隔开。

× there are a lot of songs to express loving for country,

✓ there are a lot of songs to express love for the country,

'loving'是动名词，语境中应使用名词'love'，且'for country'前应加定冠词'the'。

× to express loving for country,

✓ to express love for the country,

'for country'缺少定冠词，正确用法是'for the country'。

× because our country gave me a lot of power and responsibility, and we can grow.

✓ because our country gives me a lot of power and responsibility, and we can grow.

描述普遍事实时应使用一般现在时，'gave'应改为'gives'。

× and but it also depends on the types of those you seen.

✓ but it also depends on the types of songs you have seen.

'those'用法不当，应明确指代'songs'，且'you seen'缺少助动词'have'，应为'you have seen'。