Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然简洁，避免重复表达“害羞”和“怕被嘲笑”的意思。可以直接表达喜欢唱歌但不自信，语言更流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing when I'm alone because I lack confidence to perform in front of others.

提案: 回答中应避免重复表达“没有信心”，并且可以用更自然的表达方式说明没有学过唱歌。

例: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons because I haven't considered improving my skills and I feel a bit shy about joining a class.

提案: 回答中逻辑有些混乱，表达应更清晰，避免前后矛盾。可以先说明只愿意为亲近的人唱歌，然后解释原因。

例: I prefer to sing only for my close friends and family because I feel comfortable and not afraid of being judged.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子结构可以更自然，避免重复“singing”。可以用更流畅的表达方式说明唱歌的意义。

例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and show appreciation to others.

× Honestly, I do love singing without any audience around me because I'm not so skilled at singing so I will be ashamed of singing in front of the public and it makes me feel that they will laugh at me.

✓ Honestly, I do love singing without any audience around me because I'm not so skilled at singing, so I would be ashamed of singing in front of the public and it makes me feel that they would laugh at me.

这里的情境是假设或推测，表示如果在公众面前唱歌会感到羞愧，别人可能会笑，因此应使用情态动词“would”表示假设，而不是“will”。

× Honestly I haven't attended any class about it because I haven't thought about improvements in my singing skills and also I'm afraid of being the least one in the class because I have no confidence in my singing.

✓ Honestly, I haven't attended any class about it because I haven't thought about improving my singing skills and also I'm afraid of being the least skilled one in the class because I have no confidence in my singing.

“thought about improvements”表达不自然，应该用动名词形式“improving”表示“考虑改进”。另外，“the least one”不完整，应补充“skilled”来明确意思。

× I only want to sing for my close friends, boyfriend and my families because I don't worry about the situations as they will laugh at my singing skills so I can sing any songs in front of them without any fear.

✓ I only want to sing for my close friends, boyfriend, and my family because I don't worry about the situations as they will not laugh at my singing skills, so I can sing any songs in front of them without any fear.

“families”应为单数“family”，表示家庭整体。句中“they will laugh”与前文意思矛盾，应改为“they will not laugh”。

× Yes, I think so because singing sometimes is not just about singing a song. It serves as a medium for the singers to express his emotions or gratitude to the one he thinks for, so it will bring happiness to them.

✓ Yes, I think so because singing sometimes is not just about singing a song. It serves as a medium for singers to express their emotions or gratitude to the ones they think of, so it will bring happiness to them.

“the singers”后面用单数“his”和“he”不一致，应改为复数“singers”和“their”，保持代词与先行词一致。

× It serves as a medium for the singers to express his emotions or gratitude to the one he thinks for, so it will bring happiness to them.

✓ It serves as a medium for singers to express their emotions or gratitude to the ones they think of, so it will bring happiness to them.

动词“think”后面搭配介词应为“think of”，而不是“think for”。