Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和词汇使用错误，且表达不清晰。建议学习正确的动词形式和句子结构，避免重复和无意义的词汇。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达自己的观点。

例: No, I don't like singing because I am not good at it and I feel shy when I sing in front of others.

提案: 回答较为简短，语法时态使用不准确。建议使用正确的时态表达过去经历，并适当扩展内容，使回答更完整。

例: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I don't enjoy singing.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，且表达不完整。建议学习正确的动词形式和句子结构，直接回答问题并适当解释原因。

例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I feel shy and uncomfortable singing in front of others.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误多，且逻辑不清。建议理清思路，使用正确的语法表达自己的观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I think singing can bring happiness to people, but I personally don't enjoy it because I am very shy.

× No, I don't like seeing because I think seeing was no good.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I think singing is not good.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，且时态应为一般现在时，表示习惯或事实。动词后接动名词形式表示喜欢或不喜欢某个动作。

× Many people look looking and listen, you're seeing.

✓ Many people look and listen, you're singing.

'look looking'重复且错误，应为'look'；'you're seeing'应为'you're singing'，保持语义一致。

× So I don't like seeing.

✓ So I don't like singing.

同上，'seeing'应为'singing'，保持语义一致。

× No, I don't learn how to sing because I don't like singing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't like singing.

这里应使用现在完成时'haven't learned'表示到目前为止没有学过，'don't learn'不符合语境。

× No, I don't wanted to sing for.

✓ No, I don't want to sing for anyone.

'don't wanted'时态混用，应为'don't want'，且句子不完整，补充宾语使句子完整。

× I don't know because I don't like saying I'm very shy and uh, I think singing was not become happy to people.

✓ I don't know because I don't like singing, I'm very shy and, uh, I think singing does not make people happy.

'don't like saying'应为'don't like singing'；'singing was not become happy to people'语法错误，改为'singing does not make people happy'更通顺。