Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复，如“Make makes me feel relaxed”应改为“it makes me feel relaxed”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达。

例: Yes, I like singing because it boosts my confidence. When I sing, I often imagine myself as a professional singer, which helps me relax and enjoy the moment.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it's just one of my hobby”应为“it's just a hobby”，以及“make makes me very worse”表达不清。建议注意语法准确性，表达清晰，并避免重复。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing because it's just a hobby for me, and I'm not very good at it. I'm afraid that learning might make me feel more frustrated.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“when I'm when I'm”和“I'm prefer”。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的动词形式。

例: I usually sing for myself, especially when I'm taking a shower. I prefer to keep singing as a private moment rather than performing for others.

提案: 回答中表达不够连贯，如“what I'm saying in the bathroom”不清楚。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并注意词汇搭配，如“feel free to express myself”。

例: Yes, of course. When I sing in the bathroom, I feel very happy and free to express myself. It helps me relax and enjoy the moment.

× It's a very good way to. Make makes me feel relaxed.

✓ It's a very good way to make me feel relaxed.

句子中“Make makes”重复且错误，正确用法是动词不定式“to make”，表示目的。

× it's just one of my hobby and I don't think I'm really good at it.

✓ it's just one of my hobbies and I don't think I'm really good at it.

“one of my hobby”中“hobby”应为复数形式“hobbies”，因为“one of”后面接复数名词。

× If I learn how to sing I'm afraid it will make makes me very. Worse.

✓ If I learn how to sing, I'm afraid it will make me very worse.

“make makes”重复错误，应为“make me”。另外，“very worse”不正确，应该用“much worse”或“worse”。

× If I learn how to sing I'm afraid it will make makes me very. Worse.

✓ If I learn how to sing, I'm afraid it will make me much worse.

“very worse”搭配错误，比较级前应使用“much”修饰。

× I don't think sing for other people because I'm prefer to keep it as a private moment.

✓ I don't think I sing for other people because I prefer to keep it as a private moment.

缺少主语“I”，且“I'm prefer”错误，应为“I prefer”。

× I usually just think for myself, especially when I'm when I'm taking a shower.

✓ I usually just think to myself, especially when I'm taking a shower.

习惯用法是“think to oneself”，表示“自我思考”，而非“think for oneself”。

× what I'm saying in the bathroom I feel very happy and I can free to express myself.

✓ When I'm singing in the bathroom, I feel very happy and I can freely express myself.

“what I'm saying”应为“when I'm singing”，且“can free”应为副词“can freely”。