Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，有语法错误和重复，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达自己的观点。

例: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not good and I have never learned how to sing, so I lack confidence.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达混乱，且有语音停顿。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I find it very difficult.

提案: 回答表达了不愿意为别人唱歌的原因，较为自然，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

例: Actually, I don't want to sing for anyone because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且用词不准确。建议使用正确的语法结构，选择更合适的词汇表达情感。

例: I think singing can bring happiness to others, but for me, it only causes feelings of anxiety and awkwardness.

× No, I don't like singing because my voice is not good, sounds great and I didn't learn how to sing, so I don't have quite, I don't quite have confidence.

✓ No, I don't like singing because my voice is not good, doesn't sound great and I didn't learn how to sing, so I don't quite have confidence.

这里'sounds great'主语是my voice，单数形式，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'doesn't sound'，而不是'sounds'。另外，'I don't have quite'语序错误，应为'I don't quite have'。

× No, I haven't learned anything when I was young or when I was in school because once, but I, but I think, uh, seeing is really difficult for me.

✓ No, I didn't learn anything when I was young or when I was in school because once, but I, but I think, uh, singing is really difficult for me.

这里使用了现在完成时'haven't learned'，但后面跟的是具体过去时间点'when I was young'，应使用一般过去时'didn't learn'。另外，'seeing'应为'singing'，是拼写错误。

× No, I haven't learned anything when I was young or when I was in school because once, but I, but I think, uh, seeing is really difficult for me.

✓ No, I didn't learn anything when I was young or when I was in school because once, but I, but I think, uh, singing is really difficult for me.

单词'seeing'应为'singing'，这里是动名词形式，表示唱歌的动作，拼写错误导致意思不明确。

× OK, this question is kind of awkward actually. I don't want to sing to anyone because that's make me feel uncomfortable when I start to sing.

✓ OK, this question is kind of awkward actually. I don't want to sing to anyone because that makes me feel uncomfortable when I start to sing.

'that's make me'中，主语是that，第三人称单数，谓语动词应为'makes'，而不是'make'，这是主谓一致错误，属于句子结构错误。

× I think they may can uh, bring happiness to other people, but they can only bring me anxious, awkward, any passive emotion.

✓ I think they may bring happiness to other people, but they can only bring me anxiousness, awkwardness, or any passive emotion.

'may can'是两个情态动词连用，语法错误，应只用一个情态动词'may'。另外，'bring me anxious, awkward'中'anxious'和'awkward'是形容词，需改为名词形式'anxiousness'和'awkwardness'，并用'or'连接。