Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如动词形式错误（singing 应为 sing），且表达不够自然。建议注意动词时态和形式的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余，回答应更简洁流畅。

例: Yes, I like singing a little. I sometimes sing when I walk around or work with my friends because it gives me a sense of relief and makes me feel free.

提案: 回答中多处单词使用错误（say 应为 sing，seeing 应为 singing），句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构的练习，确保表达清楚且符合语法。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing. For me, singing is just a hobby and a way to relax. I don't think I need to be professional at it; it's more like enjoying some simple rhymes.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误（see 应为 sing），句子较长且有重复，表达不够简洁。建议使用更准确的词汇，简化句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Actually, I don't have a specific person to sing for. But if I had to choose, I would sing for my parents to express my gratitude for their support.

提案: 回答中词汇错误严重（seeing 应为 singing，liquids 词不达意），句子不完整且表达混乱。建议加强词汇准确性，注意句子完整性和逻辑性，避免使用错误词汇。

例: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the song. Happy songs with lively rhythms can make people feel joyful, while sad songs help express emotions during difficult times.

× I sometimes singing when I was walking around the road and working with my friends.

✓ I sometimes sing when I am walking around the road and working with my friends.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）在这里用法错误，应该用动词原形表示习惯动作。建议将 'singing' 改为 'sing'，并调整时态使句子更通顺。

× I just feel like seeing gives me a sense of relief and just makes me feel more free about myself.

✓ I just feel like singing gives me a sense of relief and just makes me feel more free about myself.

这里 'seeing' 应为 'singing'，因为上下文谈论的是唱歌。动词形式应为动名词，表示喜欢做某事。

× No, I haven't learned how to say.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

动词 'say' 用错，应该是 'sing'，表示学唱歌。时态使用现在完成时正确。

× I think seeing is just a hobby or just a means to relief.

✓ I think singing is just a hobby or just a means to relief.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，因为主题是唱歌。动名词形式正确。

× I don't think saying is quite needs to be quite professional for me.

✓ I don't think singing needs to be very professional for me.

句子结构混乱，'quite needs to be quite professional' 不正确，应简化为 'needs to be very professional'，表达更准确。

× So I guess thing is just like a some rhymes.

✓ So I guess singing is just like some rhymes.

'thing' 应为 'singing'，且 'a some' 组合错误，应去掉 'a'。

× Actually, there's no specific one that I want to see for.

✓ Actually, there's no specific person that I want to sing for.

'see' 用错，应为 'sing'，且 'one' 指人时用 'person' 更合适。

× If you want me to say someone, I guess my parents, I want to sing to them because I want to express my gratitude to them for supporting me so much times.

✓ If you want me to sing for someone, I guess my parents. I want to sing to them because I want to express my gratitude to them for supporting me so many times.

'say someone' 应为 'sing for someone'，'so much times' 应为 'so many times'，量词使用错误。

× Well, I think it depends when you are seeing something that is very happy with some quick rhymes or just the liquids that makes someone happy, I guess it is like so.

✓ Well, I think it depends. When you are singing something that is very happy with some quick rhymes or just the lyrics that make someone happy, I guess it is like that.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，'liquids' 应为 'lyrics'，动词 'makes' 应与复数主语 'lyrics' 一致用 'make'。句子结构需调整。

× But if you are seeing a tragedy song like you're losing someone, I guess it's quite a means to express your.

✓ But if you are singing a tragic song like you're losing someone, I guess it's quite a means to express yourself.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，'tragedy song' 应为 'tragic song'，句尾缺少宾语，应为 'express yourself'。