Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words and avoid slight redundancy. Try to combine ideas smoothly and add a specific example to enrich your response.

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress from daily life. For instance, after a long day at work, I often sing along to my favorite songs, which helps me unwind and feel refreshed.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'practice things' by specifying what you practice.

例: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing. However, I often imitate singers on television because their voices are beautiful, and this helps me practice my pitch and tone.

提案: Your answer conveys emotion but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improve sentence structure, use correct prepositions, and clarify your expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: The first person I would like to sing for is my father because he has worked incredibly hard to support our family. He is a star in my life, and singing for him would be a great way to express my gratitude and appreciation for all his sacrifices.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains minor grammatical errors and could be more specific. Use linking words and correct verb forms to improve clarity and coherence.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, singing your favorite song can be very peaceful and relaxing.

× he has worked incredibly hard for support our family

✓ he has worked incredibly hard to support our family

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to express purpose is 'to'. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11). However, since the instruction is to only correct mistakes that meet the Grammar_Problem_Type_List, and 'Incorrect use of prepositions' is ID 11, this correction is valid. The phrase 'for support our family' should be 'to support our family' to correctly express purpose.

× Singing for him would be great way to express the attitude and appreciation for all his sacrifice

✓ Singing for him would be a great way to express the attitude and appreciation for all his sacrifice

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'great way'. This is an article error (ID 22). The phrase should be 'a great way' to be grammatically correct.

× all his sacrifice

✓ all his sacrifices

The noun 'sacrifice' should be plural 'sacrifices' because it refers to multiple acts of sacrifice. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1). Using the plural form correctly reflects the multiple sacrifices made.

× singing your favorite song will be really peaceful and relax

✓ singing your favorite song will be really peaceful and relaxing

The adjective 'relax' is incorrectly used; the correct form is the present participle 'relaxing' to describe the feeling. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13). 'Relaxing' properly modifies the noun phrase.