Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误（如“I often singing”应为“I often sing”），且回答中有口语填充词“Umm”，影响流畅度。建议注意动词时态的正确使用，避免使用无意义的填充词，同时可以增加一些具体细节使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing a lot, especially when I'm alone because it helps me relax and improve my mood. For example, I often sing in the shower or while doing house chores, which makes these activities more enjoyable.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但时态使用不够准确（“practice together and performed”应保持时态一致），且句子连接略显简单。建议注意时态一致性，使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时可以补充更多细节描述。

例: I haven't learned singing professionally, but I took a music class in high school where we practiced together regularly and performed on stage. It was a fun and memorable experience that helped me build confidence.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清（如“people I know it would be fun at parts or gathering”），句子结构混乱。建议加强句子结构的清晰度，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I would like to sing for my friends and family because I feel more comfortable performing in front of people I know. Also, singing at parties or gatherings can be very enjoyable and help create a lively atmosphere.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（“Seeing”应为“Singing”），且内容较为简单，缺乏具体细节和连接词。建议注意拼写准确性，丰富回答内容，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing is a wonderful way to express emotions, and it can help people feel relaxed and joyful. For instance, many people sing to relieve stress or to celebrate happy moments.

× I often singing in the shower or when I'm cleaning.

✓ I often sing in the shower or when I'm cleaning.

这里动词应该用原形动词'sing'，因为前面有助动词'often'，而不是动名词形式'singing'。动词+ing形式通常用作动名词或现在分词，但此处需要动词原形。

× Not professionally, but I have a music class at my high school and we practice together and performed on stage.

✓ Not professionally, but I had a music class at my high school and we practiced together and performed on stage.

句子中描述的是过去的经历，时态应统一使用过去时，因此'music class'用过去时'had'，'practice'和'perform'也应改为过去时'practiced'和'performed'。

× I feel more comfortable singing in front of people I know it would be fun at parts or gathering.

✓ I feel more comfortable singing in front of people I know. It would be fun at parties or gatherings.

原句中缺少连接词或标点，导致句子结构混乱。应将句子拆分为两句，分别表达两个意思，且'parts'应为'parties'，'gathering'应为复数形式'gatherings'。

× Seeing is a great way to express emotions and it can make people feel relaxed and joyful.

✓ Singing is a great way to express emotions and it can make people feel relaxed and joyful.

原句中'Seeing'应为'Singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。此处是代词使用错误，应使用正确的词语以符合语境。