Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và ngập ngừng như "uh", "umm" làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. For example, I often sing in the bathroom where the acoustics make my voice sound better, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "I just singing" nên là "I just sing" hoặc "I have just been singing". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: Actually, I haven't had a singing coach, but I usually learn by watching YouTube short videos or online tutorials, which help me improve my skills.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "shy in front of shy singing singing". Bạn nên luyện tập nói rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý tốt hơn.

例: I usually sing alone because I feel shy singing in front of others. However, if I had to choose, I would sing for my future husband to express my feelings and make him happy.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều ngập ngừng, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết và trình bày ý tưởng mạch lạc, có cấu trúc.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, when I feel sad, I listen to songs that lift my mood and help me feel better.

× Actually I haven't had a singing coach as I just singing freely on my own.

✓ Actually I haven't had a singing coach as I just sing freely on my own.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'just'. After 'just', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'sing' is correct here.

× However I often learn how to sing through the YouTube shorts video or like online coaching teacher.

✓ However I often learn how to sing through YouTube Shorts videos or online coaching teachers.

The nouns 'video' and 'teacher' should be plural to match the context of multiple videos and teachers.

× Well, it's really I usually sing alone because I feel a little shy in front of shy singing singing in front of other people.

✓ Well, I usually sing alone because I feel a little shy singing in front of other people.

The original sentence is repetitive and has structural issues. Removing redundant words clarifies the meaning.

× However, if I had to choose someone to sing for, it would probably be my future husband because I want to express my feelings through music and make him happy.

✓ However, if I had to choose someone to sing for, it would probably be my future husband because I want to express my feelings through music and make him happy.

No correction needed; the sentence correctly uses the conditional past tense and present tense for expressing desires.

× In my perspective, I can say yes, uh, whenever I have a download, uh, I just play, play a random song and, uh, feel, uh, with the reason that make me like some distressed and the, and my sadness is.

✓ In my perspective, I can say yes. Whenever I feel down, I just play a random song and it helps me feel better and relieves my sadness.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reconstructing it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.