Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“love to singing”应为“love singing”，以及“go to the karaoke”应为“go to karaoke”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达。

例: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions. I also enjoy playing the guitar while singing. Additionally, I often go to karaoke with my friends to have fun together.

提案: 回答中有明显的语法错误和词汇使用错误，如“haven't take a pharmacy in course”不符合语法且意思不明，应该是“haven't taken any singing courses”。另外，“formal scene techniques”应为“formal singing techniques”。建议注意时态和词汇准确性。

例: No, I haven't taken any singing courses yet. However, I have learned to play the guitar. I hope to learn formal singing techniques in the future.

提案: 回答中存在发音拼写错误，如“seen Sun”应为“sing songs”，以及语法错误，如“love to express”应为“love expressing”。句子结构不够清晰，建议简化表达并注意动词形式。

例: Most of the time, I sing by myself. But I prefer to sing for my family because I am not the type of person who likes to express my emotions directly. Singing gives me a good chance to do that.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“scene”应为“singing”，以及语法错误，如“some part of them sing”应为“some of them sing”。句子较长且结构混乱，建议分句表达并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Especially when people gather, some sing songs while others play instruments. Music helps us share memories and cherish the moments we spend together.

× I really love to singing and playing the guitar at the same time.

✓ I really love singing and playing the guitar at the same time.

动词love后面接动名词形式，不能用不定式to + 动词原形。这里应使用动名词singing。

× I really like go to the karaoke with my friends and to have fun together.

✓ I really like going to the karaoke with my friends and having fun together.

动词like后面应接动名词形式，且go后面需要加动名词形式going。

× No, I haven't take a pharmacy in course up to now.

✓ No, I haven't taken a pharmacy course up to now.

现在完成时中，助动词have后应接动词的过去分词形式，take的过去分词是taken。

× I haven't take a pharmacy in course up to now.

✓ I haven't taken a pharmacy course up to now.

短语中不需要介词in，正确表达是a pharmacy course。

× For example I learned how to play the guitar, but I believe one day I will try to learn the formal scene techniques.

✓ For example, I have learned how to play the guitar, but I believe one day I will try to learn the formal singing techniques.

这里用现在完成时更合适，表示到目前为止的经历。scene应为singing，拼写错误。

× For most of the time I just seen Sun by myself, but I would prefer to sing for my family because I'm not the kind of person who love to express my internal emotions.

✓ For most of the time I just sing alone by myself, but I would prefer to sing for my family because I'm not the kind of person who loves to express my internal emotions.

seen应为动词原形sing，且love应加s与who指代的单数主语一致。

× I think singing can be a good opportunity to doing that kind of thing.

✓ I think singing can be a good opportunity to do that kind of thing.

to后面应接动词原形，不能用doing。

× Yes, I do think scene can bring joy to people, especially when people gather together, some part of them sing a song and some part of them playing instrument and the music itself can conveyed our memories and record the things we do together.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring joy to people, especially when people gather together, some of them sing a song and some of them play instruments, and the music itself can convey our memories and record the things we do together.

scene应为singing，some part of them应改为some of them，playing应改为play，conveyed应为原形convey。