Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，且存在语法和表达错误，如“when I feel overwhelming”和“sync my family sound in”不清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my feelings and relax. For instance, when I feel stressed, I like to sing along with my favorite songs to calm down.

提案: 回答结构不够清晰，语法错误较多，如“my ability of singing is not really well”和“I have no skills about it”。建议直接回答问题，并用更准确的表达说明自己的情况。

例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, so my singing skills are quite basic. I usually just sing for fun without any professional training.

提案: 回答表达了害羞的原因，但句子结构有误，如“prefer sing by myself”应为“prefer to sing by myself”。建议注意动词搭配和句子完整性。

例: I prefer to sing alone because I feel my voice is not very good. I usually feel shy singing in front of others.

提案: 回答中存在严重语法和词汇错误，如“a as long wait for people to delighted”和“recharge your bacterias”表达不清且不准确。建议使用简单且正确的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because it allows them to express their feelings and feel more relaxed.

× For example, when I feel overwhelming, I will sync my family sound in.

✓ For example, when I feel overwhelmed, I will sing with my family.

这里“overwhelming”是形容词，意思是“令人不知所措的”，而句子中应使用“overwhelmed”，表示“感到不知所措的”。另外，“sync my family sound in”表达不正确，应该是“sing with my family”，表示“和家人一起唱歌”。

× Note I haven't learned how to sing so my ability of singing is not really well.

✓ Note I haven't learned how to sing so my singing ability is not really good.

“ability of singing”表达不自然，正确用法是“singing ability”。“not really well”应改为“not really good”，因为“ability”是名词，需用形容词“good”修饰。

× I just sing for a while and I have no skills about it.

✓ I just sing for a while and I have no skills in it.

“skills about it”表达不正确，正确搭配是“skills in something”，表示“在某方面的技能”。

× Oh I absolutely want to sing by myself because I think my voice is not really beautiful.

✓ Oh I absolutely want to sing by myself because I think my voice is not very beautiful.

“not really beautiful”语气不够准确，改为“not very beautiful”更符合表达习惯。

× I always feel shy to sing in front of other people so I prefer sing by myself.

✓ I always feel shy to sing in front of other people so I prefer singing by myself.

“prefer”后面应接动名词形式“singing”，而不是动词原形“sing”。

× Absolutely, I think singing is a as long wait for people to delighted because you can recharge your bacterias and express your emotions.

✓ Absolutely, I think singing is a long-awaited way for people to be delighted because you can recharge your energy and express your emotions.

原句结构混乱，“a as long wait”错误，应为“a long-awaited way”。“to delighted”应为“to be delighted”。“bacterias”用词错误，应为“energy”或“bacteria”复数形式，但此处应表达“能量”，故用“energy”。