Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意发音与句子结构，开头要直接回答考官问题，然后用一到两句具体原因或举例支持。避免无意义的填充词（如 "hmm"），并改正动词形式（singing 而非 seeing）。可练习把理由限定在一到两点，每点用连接词衔接。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because I used to sing for my family when I was a child. My relatives always praised me, which made me more confident and eager to keep singing.

提案: 回答要更自然并注意时态与表达准确性。先直接回答（Yes, I have / No, I haven't），然后说明细节（在哪里学、学了什么、学到的技能）。避免模糊表达如 "something skills for saying"，用明确短语替代，例如 "vocal techniques" 或 "breath control"。

例: Yes, I have. As an art school student, we take compulsory singing classes where teachers teach vocal techniques such as breath control and pitch training.

提案: 问题理解有偏差，应直接说明想为谁唱歌（family, friends, audience等）。注意把过去和现在分清（listening → listened），并改正所有权和代词（her voice）。回答中可举例说明为何想为某人或某类人唱歌并简短说明原因。

例: I usually want to sing for my family because they support me. When I was a child I listened to a Chinese singer called Zhang Ji whose beautiful voice inspired me to perform for my parents.

提案: 回答应更条理清晰并用具体理由或例子支持观点。先肯定观点，然后用一至两句说明原因或举例。纠正拼写（singing）和措辞（"learn some power" 不恰当），可改为 "songs can comfort people" 或 "music can lift people's mood"。

例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because music often lifts moods and creates emotional connections. For example, singing a cheerful song can help someone feel less stressed and more positive.

× Yes, I like seeing hmm when I was a child we always singing for my family and then always says I'm great so I love it.

✓ Yes, I like singing. When I was a child we always sang for my family and they always said I was great, so I loved it.

问题类型：主谓一致与句子结构混合问题（27）。 解释（简体中文）：这句有多处问题：1) “seeing” 应为 “singing”，词汇使用错误（属于动名词与拼写错误，但与主谓一致影响句子意思）。2) 原句为复合句，应拆成两句或用逗号和连接词连接。3) 时态不一致：先说现在喜欢唱歌（现在时），描述小时候的习惯要用过去习惯时态“sang”而不是进行时“singing”。4) “always says I'm great” 主词不明确且时态不对，改为 “they always said I was great”。5) 最后 “so I love it” 既然指过去经历应改为 “so I loved it” 来保持时态一致。建议：注意现在/过去时的对应关系，复合句用连词或分句表达，主语要明确并与动词形式一致。

× Yes I have because I am an art school student.

✓ Yes, I have, because I am an art school student.

问题类型：现在时问题（6）。 解释（简体中文）：句子结构本身主要是标点和流畅性问题。回答上一问“Have you ever learnt how to sing?” 用“Yes, I have” 是正确的，后面加原因用逗号或连词连接更自然。建议：在口语或书面语中用逗号隔开原因部分，保持句子清晰。

× We need to learn how to sing.

✓ We need to learn how to sing.

问题类型：介词/搭配问题（11）。 解释（简体中文）：原句语法正确，这里保留原句。只是与上一句连贯性更好，可视情境添加“because”或解释性短语。若非必改则无需修改。

× Maybe teacher will teach you something skills for saying.

✓ Maybe the teacher will teach you some skills for singing.

问题类型：动词 + -ing 形式及名词搭配（8）。 解释（简体中文）：错误点：1) “teacher” 前缺定冠词 “the” 或 “a”。2) “something skills” 是不可接受的搭配，应为 “some skills” 或 “something” 单独使用。3) “saying” 应为 “singing”（拼写误用）。因此改为 “the teacher will teach you some skills for singing”。建议：注意可数名词的单复数和适当的限定词，并区分相似拼写词。

× MMM when I was a child I listening a Chinese singer Zhangji.

✓ When I was a child I listened to a Chinese singer, Zhangji.

问题类型：现在时/过去时使用不当（6）。 解释（简体中文）：句子要表达“我小时候听过某位歌手”，应该使用过去时“listened to”。另外，动词“listen” 要搭配介词 “to” 表示听某人，名字前加逗号使信息更清晰。建议：过去经历用一般过去时，并注意动词和介词搭配。

× I think she's voice is so beautiful so I love to sing.

✓ I think her voice is so beautiful, so I love to sing.

问题类型：代词使用错误（12）。 解释（简体中文）：错误点：使用了缩写“she's”表示“she is”或“she has”，但此处应为所有格“her”来修饰名词 “voice”。另外两个分句之间需要逗号或连接词。建议：当要表达所属关系时使用所有格代词（my, your, his, her 等）。

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

问题类型：形容词/副词或词汇使用错误（13）。 解释（简体中文）：这里“seeing” 是错误的词形，应为 “singing”。动名词表示一种活动作为主语时用 -ing 形式。建议：注意拼写并区分相近单词的含义。

× I think voice or songs have a power for people.

✓ I think voices or songs have power for people.

问题类型：形容词/副词或词汇使用错误（13）。 解释（简体中文）：问题包括：1) “voice” 单数与复数搭配不自然，改为复数 “voices” 与 “songs” 对应；2) “a power” 不需要不定冠词，通常说 “have power” 或 “have the power to do something”；3) “for people” 可保留但更自然的表达是 “bring people happiness” 或 “give people power”。建议：注意可数名词单复数的一致性及不可数名词时是否需要冠词。

× We can learn some power from sing songs.

✓ We can learn some power from singing songs.

问题类型：动词 + -ing 形式（8）。 解释（简体中文）：错误点：短语 “from sing songs” 中动词应使用动名词形式 “singing” 来跟随介词 “from”。另外“some power” 语义上可接受但可更自然地说 “we can get strength/inspiration from songs”。建议：介词后跟动名词，注意更自然的词汇选择以表达“从歌曲中获得力量/灵感”。