Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve doğrudan olmalı. Konuyu belirten net bir giriş cümlesi kullanın (ör. "Yes, I enjoy singing."). Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini ("uh", "like like", "myself") azaltın. Türler hakkında konuşurken açık ve spesifik olun: hangi türleri sevdiğinizi ve nedenlerini kısa sebeplerle destekleyin. Cümle sayısını 2–4 arasında tutun ve bağlaçlarla akışı sağlayın (e.g. "because", "but").

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. I mostly sing folk songs, although sometimes I listen to pop and rock. I like folk music because the melodies feel simple and emotional, and I often sing with my friends in the city.

提案: Cevap doğrudan ve düzenli olmalı. Eğitilmiş olup olmadığını net söyleyin ("No, I haven't" veya "Yes, I have"). Eğer ders almadıysanız, kendi kendinize öğrenme sürecinizi ve nasıl pratik yaptığınızı kısa ve açık cümlelerle açıklayın. Karmaşık veya tekrarlı ifadelerden kaçının ve 2–3 cümleyle sınırlandırın.

例: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons. I learned by listening to folk songs and practising quietly at home. Over time, I improved my pitch by singing along with recordings.

提案: Cevap daha spesifik ve organize olmalı. Kimin için şarkı söylemek istediğinizi doğrudan söyleyin (ör. "I usually sing for my family"). Ardından kısa bir neden ekleyin (ör. "because it makes them happy"). Gereksiz kelime tekrarlarını ve dolgu ifadelerini çıkarın. Toplam 1–3 cümle kullanın.

例: I usually like to sing for my family, especially my mother. Singing for them makes special moments more enjoyable and helps us feel closer.

提案: Cevabınız mantıklı ve iyi bir fikir içeriyor ancak bazı kelime seçimleri hatalı ("statistician") ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "It depends" fikrini koruyun, ardından iki kısa örnekle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar ("because", "while") iyi; ama daha net ifade ve doğru kelime kullanın. Cümleleri 2–3 ile sınırlayın ve gereksiz sözcükleri çıkarın.

例: I think it depends on the person and the situation. For example, sad songs can make someone feel more emotional when they are already upset, while upbeat songs and singing along can lift someone's mood and make them feel happier.

× Yes, I am uh loving uh singing because to me myself got it false momentarily.

✓ Yes, I love singing because, for me, it feels natural.

The student used reflexive and redundant pronouns incorrectly (to me myself) and an inappropriate continuous form 'am loving' for a general preference; also 'got it false momentarily' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use simple present 'love' for general likes, remove redundant reflexive pronoun, and replace the unclear phrase with 'feels natural'. Suggestions: use simple present for habits/preferences and avoid redundant pronouns.

× Sometimes full song pop and rock like to listen someone, but I usually folk song.

✓ Sometimes I like to listen to pop and rock songs, but I usually prefer folk songs.

Word order and word forms are incorrect: 'full song' is wrong, 'pop and rock' need to be followed by 'songs', 'listen someone' should be 'listen to someone' or 'listen to songs', and noun forms need plural for general categories. Also 'I usually folk song' lacks verb and plural. Suggestions: use correct verb 'listen to', pluralize countable nouns for general statements, and include verbs like 'like' or 'prefer'.

× I like like to see city friends both think I enjoy.

✓ I like going to the city with friends because I enjoy it.

The sentence contains repeated word 'like like', incorrect verb 'see' for visiting, and confusing structure 'both think I enjoy'. The pronoun/reference is unclear. Suggestion: use a clear verb phrase 'going to the city with friends' and a simple clause 'because I enjoy it' to express reason.

× No, I myself listen to listen learned I do first at low folk song listen and after myself I sight after I am sight was bit beautiful to be.

✓ No, I haven't had formal lessons; I learned by listening to folk songs at first, and later I felt my singing became a bit better.

Tense usage is mixed and ungrammatical: 'listen learned' is incorrect sequencing, missing auxiliary for negative perfect, and odd phrases like 'I sight after I am sight was'. Use present perfect 'haven't had' for experience, simple past 'learned' for past actions, and clear result clause 'became a bit better'. Suggestion: use correct auxiliaries for perfect tenses and maintain logical time sequence.

× Usually I myself loving thing borrowed time no one uh for not saying sometimes what uh mother together to say loving and enjoy to be.

✓ Usually I sing for myself; sometimes I sing with my mother for enjoyment.

This sentence has many misplaced pronouns and fragments: 'I myself loving thing borrowed time no one' is unintelligible. The intended meaning seems to be singing for oneself or with mother. Use clear subjects and verbs: 'I sing for myself' and 'I sing with my mother'. Suggestion: simplify sentences into clear clauses and avoid extraneous words.

× I think it depends on the statistician at the time, because sometimes when a person is unhappy, listening to sad songs can make them even sadder, while listening to and singing a upbeat songs can bring them happiness.

✓ I think it depends on the situation; sometimes when a person is unhappy, listening to sad songs can make them even sadder, while listening to and singing upbeat songs can bring them happiness.

The word 'statistician' is incorrect and should be 'situation'. Article and noun number errors: 'a upbeat songs' should be 'upbeat songs' (no 'a' and plural). Also 'listening to and singing a upbeat songs' awkwardly duplicates articles. Suggestion: choose the correct noun, remove incorrect articles, and ensure plural agreement for general statements.