Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: もっと自然で文法的に正しい短い文を使い、自分の理由を明確に述べてください。主語と動詞の一致、動詞の不定詞や現在分詞の使い方（listen to, sing）を直し、繰り返しを避けて1〜3文で答えましょう。例えば「I don't enjoy singing, but I enjoy listening to music, especially Korean pop. I can't sing Korean songs well, so I rarely sing myself.」のように。

例: I don't enjoy singing, but I love listening to music, especially Korean pop. I can't sing Korean songs very well, so I rarely try to sing.

提案: 過去の経験を述べるときは時制と語の形（junior high school student → junior high school, taken → took）に注意し、Supporting detailを1〜2文で具体的に説明しましょう。接続詞で流れを良くすると効果的です。例えば「When I was in junior high school, I took singing lessons because I enjoyed the class. It helped me learn basic techniques and it was fun.」のように。

例: Yes. When I was in junior high school, I took singing lessons because I enjoyed the school singing class. The lessons taught me basic techniques and were really fun.

提案: 話す相手や理由をはっきり述べ、形容詞の選び方（deluxeは不自然）や冠詞の誤りを直しましょう。理由を具体的にして1〜3文でまとめ、接続語で繋げると良いです。例えば「I would like to sing for my boyfriend because he sings beautifully and I enjoy listening to him. Singing for him would be encouraging.」のように。

例: I'm not sure, but I would like to sing for my boyfriend because he sings beautifully and I enjoy listening to his voice. Singing for him would make him happy.

提案: 語彙の誤用（crumblingは不適切）や時制に注意し、理由を明確に述べてください。意見→理由の順で1〜3文にまとめ、接続詞で論理をつなぎます。例えば「Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because songs can encourage people and improve mood. When I listen to music, I often feel more positive.」のように。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because songs can encourage people and lift their mood. When I listen to music, I often feel more positive and motivated.

× I don't like singing but I like listen to the music but I usually listen to the Korean music so I can't singing the Korean music so I don't singing the music.

✓ I don't like singing but I like listening to music. I usually listen to Korean music, so I can't sing Korean songs and I don't sing other music.

The sentence contains incorrect verb + -ing usage: after like, use gerund 'listening' not base form 'listen'. Also 'can't singing' and 'don't singing' are wrong; modal 'can' and auxiliaries require base verb: 'sing'. Combine and simplify clauses to avoid repetition. Suggestions: use 'like listening to music', 'I usually listen to Korean music', and 'I can't sing Korean songs' or 'I don't sing other music'. (Explanation in English as requested.)

× Yes, I have. When I was junior high school student, there was singing class and I liked singing, so I taken the lessons. It was really fun for me.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was a junior high school student, there was a singing class and I liked singing, so I took the lessons. It was really fun for me.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'junior high school student' and 'singing class'. 'Taken' is past participle but a simple past 'took' is required because there is no auxiliary. Use 'took the lessons'. Suggestions: include articles where needed and use simple past for completed actions: 'I took'. (Explanation in English as requested.)

× I'm not sure but I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is very good at singing and his voice is really deluxe for me so I like listen to the his song.

✓ I'm not sure, but I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is very good at singing and his voice is really special to me, so I like listening to his songs.

Problems: extra article 'the' before 'his song' is incorrect. 'deluxe' is not the right adjective; use 'special' or 'beautiful'. After 'like' use gerund 'listening'. Also 'song' should be plural 'songs' if speaking generally. Suggestions: remove 'the' before possessive pronoun, use appropriate adjective, and use 'listening to his songs'. (Explanation in English as requested.)

× I think singing crumbling happiness to people because when I listen to the music I was encouraged by the song.

✓ I think singing brings happiness to people because when I listen to music I feel encouraged by the songs.

Multiple issues: 'crumbling' is the wrong verb; use 'brings'. 'the music' and 'the song' are better without 'the' when speaking generally. Tense mismatch: 'I was encouraged' should be present simple 'I feel encouraged' to match general statement. Suggestions: use 'brings happiness', general nouns without 'the', and match present tense for general truths. (Explanation in English as requested.)

× So I think singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ So I think singing can bring happiness to people.

This sentence is already grammatically correct. 'Singing' as a noun (gerund) is correct, and the modal 'can' plus base verb 'bring' is used properly. No change needed. (Explanation in English as requested.)