List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配。建议加强句子结构的完整性，使用连词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误多，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks and ensures I complete everything on time.

提案: 语法错误严重，表达不流畅，句子结构混乱。建议学习正确的时态和主谓一致，简洁明了地表达原因。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

提案: 句子中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意主谓一致和词汇的准确使用，表达更自然。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient to check, and my phone reminds me of the tasks I haven't completed yet.

× Yes, I do make a list when I'm shopping. Is helpful for me to remember what I want to buy and reduce forgetting to buy something.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I'm shopping. It is helpful for me to remember what I want to buy and to avoid forgetting to buy something.

原句缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。应加上主语“it”使句子完整，同时“reduce forgetting to buy something”表达不自然，改为“to avoid forgetting to buy something”更符合英语习惯。

× Yes, I always do a list for my works because it is very useful for me to checking my complaints and I will take after I am done the work.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it is very useful for me to check my complaints and I will take care of them after I am done with the work.

“do a list”应改为“make a list”，“works”应为不可数名词“work”，“to checking”应为动词原形“to check”，“take after”用法错误，应为“take care of”。

× So when I'm checking it is very.

✓ So when I'm checking, it is very helpful.

原句缺少谓语和宾语，导致句子不完整。应补充完整表达，如“it is very helpful”。

× I thinks it is because they think that make a list is trouble and they were not mistake in their work so they not to do a list in their work.

✓ I think it is because they think that making a list is troublesome and they do not make mistakes in their work, so they do not make a list in their work.

“I thinks”应为“I think”，主语为第一人称单数，动词用原形。“make a list is trouble”应改为“making a list is troublesome”，动名词作主语，且“trouble”应为形容词“troublesome”。“they were not mistake”语法错误，应为“they do not make mistakes”。“they not to do a list”应为“they do not make a list”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's comfortable to me for checking and phone will remind me what I doesn't do.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient for me to check, and the phone will remind me what I haven't done.

“comfortable to me for checking”表达不当，应为“convenient for me to check”。“phone will remind me what I doesn't do”主谓不一致且时态错误，应为“the phone will remind me what I haven't done”。