List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Oh definitely, making a list is a must when I go shopping because I usually forgot how and when to buy the things I need.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
I do have a habit of making lists every day, planning my daily schedule and it even details down to every hour. For example, I need to finish this task evaluation in two hours, but somehow my plan what I should say is I never stick to my.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
It's probably because they feel they are struggled or they're bound to limit and they don't enjoy the feeling. They're more like a random person who who enjoy to improvise.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
For now it's definitely on my phone 'cause it's just handy, but for paper I need to grab a paper or find a clean 1 so that you're right on that. And for a phone, the other advantage of that is I can read and I can check my list whenever I want.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“forgot”应为“forget”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和简洁的表达方式，使回答更自然流畅。
例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I often forget what I need to buy and when to buy it.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中表达不完整且有语法错误，最后一句话不清楚。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。
例: Yes, I make detailed lists for my work every day, planning tasks hour by hour. However, I sometimes find it hard to stick to my plan.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中语法和用词不准确，如“struggled”应为“struggled with”或“restricted”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，表达更清晰。
例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to be spontaneous and improvise.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有些表达不够清晰，如“so that you're right on that”不明确。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can easily check and update my list anytime without needing paper.
文法
× I usually forgot how and when to buy the things I need.
✓ I usually forget how and when to buy the things I need.
这里的时间状语是“usually”，表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。动词forgot是过去式，应该改为forget。
× For example, I need to finish this task evaluation in two hours, but somehow my plan what I should say is I never stick to my.
✓ For example, I need to finish this task evaluation in two hours, but somehow I never stick to my plan.
原句结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，且“my plan what I should say is”部分不通顺。应简化为“I never stick to my plan”，使句子结构完整且表达清晰。
× It's probably because they feel they are struggled or they're bound to limit and they don't enjoy the feeling.
✓ It's probably because they feel they are struggling or they're bound by limits and they don't enjoy the feeling.
“feel they are struggled”中“struggled”是过去分词，错误用法，应使用现在分词“struggling”表示正在经历的状态；“bound to limit”应改为“bound by limits”，正确使用介词表达被限制的状态。
× They're more like a random person who who enjoy to improvise.
✓ They're more like random people who enjoy improvising.
“a random person”与复数主语“they”不一致，应改为复数“random people”；“who who”重复，应删去一个；“enjoy to improvise”搭配错误，动词“enjoy”后应接动名词形式“improvising”。
× For now it's definitely on my phone 'cause it's just handy, but for paper I need to grab a paper or find a clean 1 so that you're right on that.
✓ For now it's definitely on my phone 'cause it's just handy, but for paper I need to grab a paper or find a clean one so that I'm right on that.
“you're right on that”中的“you're”应为“I'm”，因为说话者指自己；“1”应为“one”，数字应写成单词形式；整体表达更自然。
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