List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免多余的词汇，并且注意时态和语法的准确性。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来说明你做购物清单的习惯和原因。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list every day because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议使用完整的句子并清楚表达观点。同时，增加连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I make lists for my study every day. I find it very helpful because it allows me to organize my tasks clearly and manage my time effectively.

提案: 回答表达不清且语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用合适的连接词。可以具体说明为什么有些人不喜欢做清单。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and prefer to plan their tasks more flexibly.

提案: 回答中缺少关键名词，表达不完整且不连贯。建议使用完整句子，明确说明偏好并给出理由，同时注意词汇的准确使用。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easier to edit than using paper.

× Actually yes, recently I have been making a list for my shopping every day and it has already become my daily routine because I believed it can help me clear on shopping. And yes.

✓ Actually yes, recently I have been making a list for my shopping every day and it has already become my daily routine because I believe it can help me be clear on shopping. And yes.

句中使用了过去时态“believed”，但根据上下文，表达的是现在的想法，应使用现在时态“believe”。此外，短语“clear on shopping”不太自然，改为“be clear on shopping”更合适。

× Actually yes, recently I have been making a list for my shopping every day and it has already become my daily routine because I believed it can help me clear on shopping. And yes.

✓ Actually yes, recently I have been making a list for my shopping every day and it has already become my daily routine because I believe it can help me be clear about shopping. And yes.

短语“clear on shopping”用法不正确，应该用“be clear about shopping”来表达“对购物清楚”的意思。

× Actually, yes, recently I have been making lists for my study and it has become my daily routine. I suppose it is one of the most particular things I've ever done because I it can help me clearly.

✓ Actually, yes, recently I have been making lists for my study and it has become my daily routine. I suppose it is one of the most particular things I've ever done because it can help me clearly.

句中多了一个多余的代词“I”，应删除以保持句子通顺。

× Actually, yes, recently I have been making lists for my study and it has become my daily routine. I suppose it is one of the most particular things I've ever done because I it can help me clearly.

✓ Actually, yes, recently I have been making lists for my study and it has become my daily routine. I suppose it is one of the most particular things I've ever done because it can help me clearly.

句尾“help me clearly”表达不准确，应改为“help me clearly understand”或“help me be clear”，但因原句未完整，保持原句删除多余词即可。

× Actually, I believed it compared to making this. They prefer to doing something strategically because they should spend several times to make lists and they think it is a way of wasting time.

✓ Actually, I believe compared to making this, they prefer doing something strategically because they should spend several times making lists and they think it is a way of wasting time.

“prefer to doing”用法错误，正确用法是“prefer doing”或“prefer to do”。此外，“I believed”应改为现在时“I believe”，保持时态一致。

× Actually, I believed it compared to making this. They prefer to doing something strategically because they should spend several times to make lists and they think it is a way of wasting time.

✓ Actually, I believe compared to making this, they prefer doing something strategically because they should spend several times making lists and they think it is a way of wasting time.

“spend several times to make lists”表达不正确，应改为“spend several times making lists”，即“花费多次时间做清单”。

× I suppose compared to making this on paper, I prefer to make this on my because my take on this is that on is more convenient and particular than on paper.

✓ I suppose compared to making this on paper, I prefer to make this on my phone because my take on this is that it is more convenient and particular than on paper.

句中“on my”缺少名词，应补充“phone”；“on is more convenient”中的“on”应改为“it”，指代前文内容。