List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，影响了表达的自然流畅。建议注意动词形式的正确使用，并避免重复词汇。此外，回答可以更简洁，直接表达观点。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because it makes me feel stressed. I prefer to browse freely and enjoy the experience without any pressure.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，句子结构不够清晰。建议练习使用正确的时态和句子结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I arrive at work to organize my tasks for the day. This helps me stay focused and ensures I complete all my responsibilities efficiently.

提案: 回答中多次出现发音或拼写错误（如'Macleans'），影响理解。建议加强词汇准确性和句子表达的逻辑性，避免重复和不完整的句子。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete everything on the list, which can cause stress. Instead, they prefer to do tasks based on their mood or priorities at the moment.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议练习清晰表达原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Unlike paper lists, my phone can remind me with alarms, so I don't forget my tasks.

× I don't like make list when I wanna go to shopping mall, because if I make make the list it will let me feel a little bit stressful because I need to complete all this.

✓ I don't like making a list when I wanna go to the shopping mall, because if I make the list it will make me feel a little bit stressed because I need to complete all of it.

动词后面接动名词形式（make → making）表示喜欢做某事，原句中动词形式错误。

× I don't like make list when I wanna go to shopping mall, because if I make make the list it will let me feel a little bit stressful because I need to complete all this.

✓ I don't like making a list when I wanna go to the shopping mall, because if I make the list it will make me feel a little bit stressed because I need to complete all of it.

shopping mall前缺少定冠词the，表示特指某个购物中心。

× I would say some people do not like Macleans because they think Macleast will let them feel a bit stressed since they will always think they need to finish or complete all thing on it.

✓ I would say some people do not like making lists because they think making lists will make them feel a bit stressed since they will always think they need to finish or complete everything on it.

动词后应使用动名词形式making lists，且all thing应改为everything。

× they need to finish or complete all thing on it.

✓ they need to finish or complete everything on it.

all thing用法错误，应使用everything表示所有的事物。

× In my case, I prefer making these on my because phone can I go? Because I always bring my phone anywhere anytime but the paper.

✓ In my case, I prefer making these on my phone because I always bring my phone anywhere anytime, but paper I sometimes lose.

prefer后应接动名词making，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× In my case, I prefer making these on my because phone can I go? Because I always bring my phone anywhere anytime but the paper.

✓ In my case, I prefer making these on my phone because I always bring my phone anywhere anytime, but paper I sometimes lose.

原句结构混乱，需调整词序和句子结构使其通顺。

× I will try to make a list because I need to know like today's tasks.

✓ I will try to make a list because I need to know today's tasks.

like在此处多余，应去掉。

× So sometimes they will try to follow their feeling or thinking do tasks.

✓ So sometimes they will try to follow their feelings or thoughts to do tasks.

动词后应使用名词形式feelings和thoughts，且do tasks前应加介词to。

× So when I after work it I need to complete all tasks related job.

✓ So after work, I need to complete all tasks related to the job.

related后应加介词to，且句子结构需调整。

× So when I after work it I need to complete all tasks related job.

✓ So after work, I need to complete all tasks related to the job.

job前缺少定冠词the，表示特指工作。