List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases such as 'any kind of other, like if you're going for any kind of, uh, personal shopping things.' Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping, whether it's for groceries or personal items, because it helps me remember exactly what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary things or forgetting important items like dinner ingredients.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your process logically. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'on a daily basis' twice. Be specific about how making lists helps you manage tasks and delegate work.

例: Yes, I make a daily to-do list when I get home to organize my tasks. As a supervisor, I use this list to assign responsibilities to my team members, which helps ensure that everyone knows their duties and that work is completed efficiently.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'more organized in their work by their self' and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to provide a clearer explanation with specific reasons.

例: I think some people avoid making lists because they trust their memory and feel confident managing tasks without writing them down. They might also prefer relying on their own organization skills rather than using lists.

提案: Your answer contains many filler words and incomplete sentences, which affect clarity. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, finish your sentences fully to convey your point clearly.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always accessible and convenient. This way, I can quickly jot down things I might forget later and set reminders to help me stay organized.

× Usually I make a list whenever I'll do shopping, either it's for grocery shopping or for any kind of other, like if you're going for any kind of, uh, personal shopping things.

✓ Usually I make a list whenever I do shopping, either it's for grocery shopping or for any kind of other, like if you're going for any kind of, uh, personal shopping things.

The use of 'I'll' (I will) is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a habitual action in the present. The modal verb 'will' should not be used to describe habitual actions. Instead, the simple present tense 'I do' is appropriate.

× Because I think it's easier for us to know and to remember what we need to shop exactly instead of buying other things or to forget about dinner.

✓ Because I think it's easier for me to know and to remember exactly what I need to shop instead of buying other things or forgetting about dinner.

The pronoun 'us' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to their own experience, so 'me' is appropriate. Also, 'to forget' should be 'forgetting' to maintain parallel structure with 'buying'.

× Yes, On a daily basis, whenever I reach home on my desk, first I'll make whatever the things I need to do, whatever the task I need to finish on the daily basis.

✓ Yes, on a daily basis, whenever I reach home and sit at my desk, first I make a list of the things I need to do, the tasks I need to finish on a daily basis.

The phrase 'on my desk' is incorrectly used; it should be 'sit at my desk' to indicate the action. Also, 'I'll make whatever the things' is awkward and unclear; it is better to say 'I make a list of the things'. The modal 'I'll' is unnecessary here as it describes a habitual action.

× And after that as a supervisor, I assign all the works to my teammates with that or which member are doing which kind of responsibility and I need to then further take.

✓ And after that, as a supervisor, I assign all the work to my teammates, specifying which member is responsible for which tasks, and then I follow up accordingly.

'Works' should be 'work' as 'work' is uncountable in this context. The phrase 'with that or which member are doing which kind of responsibility' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'specifying which member is responsible for which tasks'. Also, 'I need to then further take' is unclear and corrected to 'then I follow up accordingly' for clarity.

× In my opinion, some people are not making list because they are more confident about remembering all the things whatever they are buying for the shopping or they are more organized in their work by their self instead of making lists.

✓ In my opinion, some people do not make lists because they are confident about remembering everything they need to buy for shopping or they are more organized in their work by themselves instead of making lists.

'Are not making list' should be 'do not make lists' to express habitual action. 'Whatever they are buying for the shopping' is awkward; 'everything they need to buy for shopping' is clearer. 'By their self' should be 'by themselves' as the correct reflexive pronoun.

× Uh, due to this technological world, I prefer to make notes on my phone instead of, uh, using on paper or pen because, uh, these days phones or mobile phones are easily accessible to everyone, uh, to me as well.

✓ Uh, due to this technological world, I prefer to make notes on my phone instead of using paper or pen because these days phones or mobile phones are easily accessible to everyone, including me.

The phrase 'using on paper or pen' is incorrect; it should be 'using paper or pen'. Also, 'to me as well' is better expressed as 'including me' for clarity.

× So whenever I'll think about anything which I forget in future, so I'll make note at the same time so that it's easier for me to make a reminder as.

✓ So whenever I think about anything I might forget in the future, I make a note at the same time so that it's easier for me to set a reminder.

The use of 'I'll think' is incorrect because the sentence refers to a habitual action; simple present 'I think' is appropriate. Also, 'which I forget in future' should be 'I might forget in the future' to express possibility. 'I'll make note' is corrected to 'I make a note' for habitual action. The phrase 'make a reminder as' is incomplete and corrected to 'set a reminder'.