List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and effective by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Instead of saying 'I do make' and 'I just enlist', you can say 'Yes, I usually make a shopping list on WhatsApp.' Also, try to keep your answer within 3-4 sentences for clarity.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on WhatsApp. It helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time when I am at the store.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with reasons. Also, avoid informal words like 'Guess'.

例: Yes, I usually make a list of tasks for the next day at night. This method works well because I aim to complete 80 to 90 percent of the tasks on my list.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs better sentence structure and linking words to sound natural. Avoid repeating the same idea twice. Try to combine sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'since'.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they are not very organised and prefer to stay in their comfort zone. Therefore, they avoid planning their next day.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural by improving grammar and clarity. For example, avoid phrases like 'it may last' which is unclear. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easier to keep track of items and there is less chance of losing the list compared to paper.

× Yes I do make.

✓ Yes, I do.

The phrase 'do make' is unnecessary here; the correct response to the question 'Do you make a list when you shop?' is simply 'Yes, I do.' The verb 'make' is already implied by 'do.' This correction improves naturalness and grammatical correctness.

× What I do is I just enlist the item I want to buy in my WhatsApp.

✓ What I do is I just enlist the items I want to buy on my WhatsApp.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to listing items on a platform like WhatsApp; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, 'item' should be plural 'items' to match the context of listing multiple things.

× Guess at night I make my list for tomorrow's work.

✓ I guess at night I make my list for tomorrow's work.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning. Adding 'I' clarifies the subject and corrects the sentence structure.

× My perception is that why they don't make list is they are not that organised or they love their comfort zone.

✓ My perception is that the reason they don't make lists is that they are not that organised or they love their comfort zone.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to lists in general. Also, the phrase 'why they don't make list' is awkward; 'the reason they don't make lists' is more appropriate.

× I prefer to make list on phone because when you enlist the items on your on a paper it may last, but when you list on a phone there is less chances of missing that data.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because when you enlist the items on paper, they may last, but when you list on a phone there are fewer chances of missing that data.

The phrase 'make list' should be 'make lists' to be plural. 'On phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'On your on a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper.' Also, 'less chances' should be 'fewer chances' because 'chances' is countable.