List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态混乱和多余的词汇。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态，并避免重复表达。

例: Sometimes I make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

提案: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用时态，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a list when I do my homework. It helps me stay organized because I can check my tasks frequently.

提案: 回答中表达重复且不够具体，语法错误较多。建议避免重复，提供更具体的原因，并使用恰当的词汇表达情绪。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed if they cannot complete all tasks, and they prefer to work more freely.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意时态一致，简化句子结构，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. People often forget paper lists, but they always carry their phones with them.

× Where sometimes I make a list when I was when I go shopping because I think making this can helps me to find on what things I should buy quickly and I always forgot the things I should buy so I need a list.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when I go shopping because I think making this can help me find what things I should buy quickly and I always forget the things I should buy so I need a list.

句中使用了错误的过去时态“was”和“forgot”，而描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时。此外，“can helps”中动词形式错误，应为“can help”。建议将句子调整为一般现在时，动词形式正确。

× Will I make a list when I was, when I were, when I doing my homework? It works well because I can check it out very frequently and I can I can know what should I do. It makes me more organized.

✓ I make a list when I do my homework. It works well because I can check it very frequently and I can know what I should do. It makes me more organized.

句中“was”、“were”和“doing”使用不当，描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时。句子结构也需调整以符合语法规范。

× MMM, In my opinion, I think some people don't like making this because they can do something better and they sometimes they sometimes think, think making this makes them feel very stressed or intensed when they didn't didn't finish their work. So I think.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they can do something better and sometimes think making lists makes them feel very stressed or intense when they don't finish their work.

“intensed”是错误的词形，应为“intense”。此外，句中时态不一致，需统一使用一般现在时。重复词语应删除。

× Where I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think making it on my phone is more convenient than making it on the paper. People may forgot the paper where they placed but they will always carried their phones every time. So I think it is a more convenient way. Also there's a lot of apps on the phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think making it on my phone is more convenient than making it on paper. People may forget where they placed the paper but they always carry their phones. So I think it is a more convenient way. Also, there are a lot of apps on the phone.

介词“on the paper”应为“on paper”，表示泛指。动词“forgot”应为“forget”，时态需统一。动词“carried”应为“carry”，保持一般现在时。句子结构需调整以符合语法规范。