List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“laser”应为“list”，且句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议加强基础语法和词汇的准确使用，避免口语中的犹豫词，回答时尽量简洁明了。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I only buy necessities or just look around casually.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm not usually make”应为“I don't usually make”，且表达不够流畅。建议练习正确的时态和句型，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: To be honest, I don't usually make lists for study or work, but I think they are really helpful because they help me work more efficiently.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“don't like make lists”应为“don't like making lists”，句子结构不够清晰。建议加强动名词的使用和句子结构的练习，表达更准确。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring, and sometimes it's hard to follow the list when unexpected things happen.

提案: 回答中“make a laser”应为“make a list”，词汇错误影响表达。建议注意单词拼写和发音，使用正确词汇表达观点。

例: Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and I can check it anytime.

× Actually, no, I don't make uh, laser while I go shopping because I just buy some necessity or look around, wash up.

✓ Actually, no, I don't make a list while I go shopping because I just buy some necessities or look around, wash up.

这里的错误是动词后面缺少-ing形式，应该用make a list。并且laser应为list，necessity应为复数形式necessities。建议注意动词后面接动名词形式，以及名词的单复数形式。

× Actually, no, I don't make uh, laser while I go shopping because I just buy some necessity or look around, wash up.

✓ Actually, no, I don't make a list while I go shopping because I just buy some necessities or look around, wash up.

necessity是不可数名词，表示必需品时应使用复数形式necessities。建议注意名词的单复数形式。

× Umm to be honest, I'm not usually make at least one study or work, but I think it's really helpful.

✓ Umm to be honest, I don't usually make at least one study or work, but I think it's really helpful.

这里动词make前缺少助动词do，且动词形式错误。建议使用一般现在时的否定形式don't make。

× Oh I think some people don't like make lists because they find it boring and also for some people make a list it's really hard to follow and they may have made some random events to come up.

✓ Oh I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and also for some people making a list is really hard to follow and they may have some random events come up.

动词like后应接动名词making，且句子中make a list应改为making a list。建议注意动词后接动名词形式。

× Personally I prefer make a laser on my phone because it's more convenient for me and also I can check my list at any time.

✓ Personally I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me and also I can check my list at any time.

动词prefer后应接动名词making，且laser应为list。建议注意动词后接动名词形式和单词拼写。