List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and is incomplete. Try to use correct verb forms and complete your sentences. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. For example, say: "Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need and saves time."

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repeating phrases like "for my work" multiple times. For example, say: "No, I don't make lists for work because my job involves interacting with customers directly, so I don't find lists necessary."

例: No, I don't make lists for work because my job involves interacting with customers directly, so I don't find lists necessary.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and filler words. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words. For example: "Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Instead, they prefer to start their tasks immediately."

例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Instead, they prefer to start their tasks immediately.

提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. Also, it's easy to edit and share lists using apps like Notes."

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. Also, it's easy to edit and share lists using apps like Notes.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it's help me to keep remember things that I need for me and it also help me to save my time because.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember the things that I need and it also helps me to save my time.

The modal verb 'help' is incorrectly used without the correct third person singular form 'helps'. Also, 'keep remember' is incorrect; 'remember' alone is sufficient. The phrase 'for me' is redundant and removed for clarity. The sentence is corrected to use 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it' and to improve clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it's help me to keep remember things that I need for me and it also help me to save my time because.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember the things that I need and it also helps me to save my time.

The verbs 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue specific to third person singular.

× No, I never make any kind of list for my work because I don't think I need any list for my work or job because as I'm working in the restaurant so I just have to talk with the customers and deal with their problems.

✓ No, I never make any kind of list for my work because I don't think I need any list for my work or job since I work in a restaurant; I just have to talk with customers and deal with their problems.

The phrase 'as I'm working' is awkward and better replaced with 'since I work' to express reason. Also, 'in the restaurant' is corrected to 'in a restaurant' for article usage. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I never make any kind of list for my work because I don't think I need any list for my work or job because as I'm working in the restaurant so I just have to talk with the customers and deal with their problems.

✓ No, I never make any kind of list for my work because I don't think I need any list for my work or job since I work in a restaurant; I just have to talk with customers and deal with their problems.

The preposition 'in the restaurant' is incorrect here; 'in a restaurant' is more appropriate as it refers to a general place of work, not a specific restaurant previously mentioned.

× Uh, some people are not like to make the lists for them because they find it is, it's take too much time and, uh, rather than making a list and waste their time on that, they just like to start their task.

✓ Uh, some people do not like to make lists because they find it takes too much time and, rather than making a list and wasting their time on that, they just like to start their tasks.

The phrase 'are not like to make' is incorrect; it should be 'do not like to make'. 'The lists for them' is awkward and unnecessary; 'lists' suffices. 'It's take' is incorrect; it should be 'it takes'. Also, 'waste' should be 'wasting' to match the gerund form after 'rather than'. 'Their task' is pluralized to 'their tasks' for natural usage.

× Uh, some people are not like to make the lists for them because they find it is, it's take too much time and, uh, rather than making a list and waste their time on that, they just like to start their task.

✓ Uh, some people do not like to make lists because they find it takes too much time and, rather than making a list and wasting their time on that, they just like to start their tasks.

The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a third person singular verb agreement issue.

× I prefer to make lists on my phone because my phone is every time with me and it's easy for me to change the things and I can also share my list or any kind of schedules with my colleagues or with my friends.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because my phone is always with me and it's easy for me to change things, and I can also share my list or any kind of schedule with my colleagues or friends.

The phrase 'my phone is every time with me' is incorrect; 'my phone is always with me' is correct. 'Change the things' should be 'change things' for natural usage. 'Schedules' should be singular 'schedule' to match 'any kind of'. The phrase 'with my friends' is simplified by removing 'with' before 'my colleagues' for parallelism.

× I prefer to make lists on my phone because my phone is every time with me and it's easy for me to change the things and I can also share my list or any kind of schedules with my colleagues or with my friends.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because my phone is always with me and it's easy for me to change things, and I can also share my list or any kind of schedule with my colleagues or friends.

The quantifier 'any kind of schedules' is incorrect; 'any kind of schedule' is the correct singular form to match 'kind' which is singular.