List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น ใช้ 'browsing' ให้ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการซ้ำซ้อน นอกจากนี้ควรตอบตรงคำถามและขยายความอย่างเหมาะสม

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy browsing and discovering new products on my own.

提案: คำตอบของคุณดีที่มีการให้เหตุผลและตัวอย่าง แต่ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'help' เป็น 'helps' และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties. Overall, making a list definitely improves my productivity.

提案: คำตอบนี้ไม่ชัดเจนและไม่ตอบคำถาม ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและขยายความด้วยเหตุผลที่เหมาะสม เช่น ความรู้สึกหรือประสบการณ์ส่วนตัว

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or feel restricted by having to follow a strict plan.

提案: คำตอบไม่สมบูรณ์และไม่ชัดเจน ควรตอบให้ครบถ้วนและอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน พร้อมใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์

例: For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because it feels more tangible and I can easily see everything at once without needing a device.

× No, I prefer to browsing and discovering the product by myself.

✓ No, I prefer browsing and discovering the product by myself.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. The phrase 'prefer to browsing' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer browsing'.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it help me stay organized and focused.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused.

The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help' to agree in number.

× For example, by leading task in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.

✓ For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.

The phrase 'leading task' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'listing tasks' to convey the intended meaning.

× Overall, make a little definitely improve my productivity.

✓ Overall, making a list definitely improves my productivity.

The phrase 'make a little' is incorrect. It should be 'making a list' to use the gerund form as the subject, and 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with the singular subject.

× In my opinion is dead by the way.

✓ In my opinion, it is outdated anyway.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Adding 'it is' and replacing 'dead by the way' with 'outdated anyway' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think the paper can.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on paper because I think paper is more reliable.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'is more reliable' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.