List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, say 'I always make a shopping list because I am afraid of forgetting something. It helps me buy everything I need efficiently.'

例: I always make a shopping list because I am afraid of forgetting something. It helps me buy everything I need efficiently.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly. For example, say 'No, I don't make lists for work because I am a student and I don't have a job yet. When I study, I find it hard to concentrate.'

例: No, I don't make lists for work because I am a student and I don't have a job yet. When I study, I find it hard to concentrate.

提案: Your answer contradicts the question and has grammatical errors. Make sure to answer the question directly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive. However, lists help organize plans and complete tasks step by step.'

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive. However, lists help organize plans and complete tasks step by step.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by removing filler words and making it more concise. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's very convenient.'

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's very convenient.

× Yes, I always make a list when I'm going to shopping because I'm afraid to forgive something.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I'm going shopping because I'm afraid to forget something.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' when indicating an activity. Also, 'forgive' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'forget' when referring to failing to remember something.

× And when you go to some lists, shopping lists, uh, it is easier to buy anything what you want.

✓ And when you have some lists, shopping lists, uh, it is easier to buy anything you want.

The phrase 'go to some lists' is incorrect because 'go to' is not used with 'lists'. Instead, 'have' or 'use' is appropriate. Also, 'anything what you want' is incorrect; 'anything you want' is the correct form without 'what'.

× No, because I don't have job in entering in my life because I go to university and when I study something I can't concentrate something.

✓ No, because I don't have a job at the moment since I go to university, and when I study, I can't concentrate on anything.

The phrase 'I don't have job' lacks the article 'a'. 'In entering in my life' is unclear and incorrect; 'at the moment' or 'currently' is better. Also, 'concentrate something' is incorrect; the verb 'concentrate' is followed by 'on' plus an object, so 'concentrate on anything' is correct.

× Some people like making lists because they can organize their plans and when they making lists they can do.

✓ Some people like making lists because they can organize their plans, and when they make lists, they can do it.

The phrase 'when they making lists' is incorrect; it should be 'when they make lists' because after 'when' we use the base form for present tense. Also, the sentence was incomplete, so 'do it' was added for clarity.

× For myself, uh, it is convenient to make lists on my phone because my phone is with me everywhere where I go, always.

✓ For me, uh, it is convenient to make lists on my phone because my phone is with me everywhere I go, always.

The phrase 'For myself' is incorrect here; 'For me' is the correct expression. Also, 'everywhere where I go' is redundant; 'everywhere I go' is sufficient and correct.