List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I sometimes make a list for shopping first. It can remind me things I need to buy. What's more, make a plan for purchase can avoid me by unnecessary things.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Sometimes I make a list for my work. I think the list works when it tells me what I should do first. However, a time this doesn't work on me. What really works on me is the pressure of time.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
It may because they thought it's a waste of time when make thinking about making a list. Sometimes the purpose of making the list looks like to tell themselves they got a list and didn't worry about anything. But the fact is the list that doesn't work like a schedule.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer write my list down on paper. Firstly, it's easier to erase or add notes on paper than my phone. What's more, a paper can be hanged on the wall and remind me when I see it. This is the reason I think, umm, writing my list on paper is.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 65.0提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用，例如“remind me of things I need to buy”，并且避免重复表达。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式，使回答更流畅。
例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list beforehand because it helps me remember the items I need. Moreover, planning my purchases prevents me from buying unnecessary things.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“a time this doesn't work on me”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。
例: Sometimes I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. However, sometimes the list is not effective, and I find that time pressure motivates me more.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 55.0提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，注意时态和词序，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。
例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. Sometimes, they make a list just to feel organized, but the list doesn't function like a real schedule.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prefer write”应为“prefer to write”，以及“a paper can be hanged”应为“a paper can be hung”。建议注意动词不定式和被动语态的正确使用，避免口语填充词，使表达更自然。
例: I prefer to write my list on paper because it's easier to erase or add notes. Also, I can hang the paper on the wall, which reminds me whenever I see it.
文法
× It can remind me things I need to buy.
✓ It can remind me of the things I need to buy.
这里缺少介词“of”，短语应为“remind me of something”，表示提醒某人某事。
× make a plan for purchase can avoid me by unnecessary things.
✓ making a plan for purchases can help me avoid unnecessary things.
动词短语使用错误，应使用动名词“making”，并且“purchase”应为复数“purchases”，介词“by”错误，应改为“help me avoid”。
× Sometimes the purpose of making the list looks like to tell themselves they got a list and didn't worry about anything.
✓ Sometimes the purpose of making the list seems to be telling themselves they have a list and don't worry about anything.
“looks like to tell”结构错误，应改为“seems to be telling”，动词形式和结构需调整。
× I prefer write my list down on paper.
✓ I prefer to write my list down on paper.
动词“prefer”后应接不定式“to write”，而不是直接动词原形。
× make a plan for purchase can avoid me by unnecessary things.
✓ making a plan for purchases can help me avoid unnecessary things.
“avoid me by”结构错误，应为“help me avoid”，正确使用代词和动词搭配。
× a paper can be hanged on the wall and remind me when I see it.
✓ a paper can be hung on the wall and remind me when I see it.
“hanged”用于处决，悬挂物品应使用“hung”。
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