List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket. It helps me remember what I need and makes me feel more organized.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题，建议注意单复数和时态的正确使用，并适当使用连接词。

例: Yes, I always make a list of tasks I need to complete each day. It feels very satisfying to check off each task as I finish it.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子，避免口语化的表达，并提供更具体的理由。

例: Some people might not like making lists because they have a strong memory and can remember things easily. However, I find lists helpful because I tend to forget things.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并避免断句错误。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I am used to writing with a pen. Although I have tried using my phone, I find it less convenient.

× Before entering the supermarket I will write down something what I want on a paper leave something can help me felt a sense of control in my life, improving the quality of my life.

✓ Before entering the supermarket, I write down something I want on a paper to leave something that can help me feel a sense of control in my life, improving the quality of my life.

这里动词形式使用不当。'will write'与上下文时间不符，应使用一般现在时；'what I want'应改为定语从句'that I want'；'leave something can help me felt'结构混乱，应改为'leave something that can help me feel'，felt是过去式，需用原形动词feel。建议使用正确的动词形式和从句结构。

× For sure, before starting my work I will make a list of all the task I need to complete for the date.

✓ For sure, before starting my work I will make a list of all the tasks I need to complete for the day.

'task'应为复数形式'tasks'，因为指多个任务；'for the date'应为'for the day'，表示当天。

× There is a great sense of satisfaction in checking each one of as I go.

✓ There is a great sense of satisfaction in checking each one of them as I go.

'each one of as'缺少宾格代词，应为'each one of them'，指代前文提到的任务。

× Perhaps those people have an incredible powerful memory and can remember everything in their minds easily across what?

✓ Perhaps those people have an incredibly powerful memory and can remember everything in their minds easily, which I cannot.

'incredible powerful'形容词搭配错误，应为'adverb + adjective'结构'incredibly powerful'；'across what?'语义不明，改为补充说明句子，表达自己记忆力不如他们。

× I use my paper because I get used to using pens to write down something.

✓ I use paper because I am used to using pens to write things down.

'my paper'不合适，通常说'use paper'；'get used to'应为现在完成时态'am used to'表示习惯；'write down something'应改为'write things down'更自然。

× Before I went to university. I never use my to lift something.

✓ Before I went to university, I never used my phone to list things.

句子断裂，应合并为一句；'never use'应为过去时'never used'；'to lift something'应为'to list things'，推测原意为列清单。

× I thought I'm trying to use phone but I think it's less convenient to me.

✓ I thought I would try to use the phone, but I think it's less convenient for me.

时态混用，'I'm trying'应改为'would try'表示将来尝试；'use phone'应加定冠词'the phone'；'less convenient to me'应为'less convenient for me'，介词使用错误。