List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构稍显重复，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”来增强逻辑性，并尝试用不同的表达方式避免重复。

例: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the groceries I need, so I don't forget anything.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“a to do list”应为“a to-do list”，且句子开头重复提问部分显得不自然。建议直接回答问题，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work tasks, which helps me schedule my time efficiently and complete everything on time.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，‘combine themselves with the To Do List’不自然。建议用更准确的表达说明原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to focus on tasks spontaneously, so following a strict to-do list feels uncomfortable to them.

提案: 回答中重复使用“phone”，且‘Then it would be more efficient for me to do my tasks then’表达重复且不够自然。建议简化表达并使用连接词。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can set alarms and notifications, which helps me complete my tasks more efficiently.

× I often make A to do list for all my tasks in work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

✓ I often make a to-do list for all my tasks at work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

这里的“a to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”，且“to do list”应连字符连接为“to-do list”，表示“待办事项清单”。另外，“in work”应改为“at work”，因为表示在工作场所时用介词“at”。建议注意冠词大小写和固定搭配的介词使用。

× I often make A to do list for all my tasks in work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

✓ I often make a to-do list for all my tasks at work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

“in work”用法不正确，表示“在工作”时应使用介词“at”，即“at work”。这是固定搭配，需注意介词的正确使用。

× I believe some people are more task oriented so it may be uncomfortable for them to combine themselves with the To Do List.

✓ I believe some people are more task-oriented, so it may be uncomfortable for them to associate themselves with the to-do list.

“combine themselves with”用法不当，通常“combine”不与反身代词连用，且表达“与待办事项清单结合”应使用“associate with”或类似表达。此外，“To Do List”应统一小写为“to-do list”。建议注意动词搭配和大小写规范。

× I believe some people are more task oriented so it may be uncomfortable for them to combine themselves with the To Do List.

✓ I believe some people are more task-oriented, so it may be uncomfortable for them to associate themselves with the to-do list.

“task oriented”应为复合形容词“task-oriented”，中间需加连字符，表示“以任务为导向的”。这是形容词的正确写法，需注意复合形容词的连字符使用。