List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子较长且结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确时态，并且避免冗余。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer online shopping. The website already shows the items I want to buy, so I don't need to write a separate list.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致，时态使用正确，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I'm currently a student, so I don't make lists for work. However, I do make lists for my studies. They help me remember my daily tasks, and I can check off items when I finish them. This makes me feel confident and organized.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误多，逻辑不够连贯。建议先明确观点，再用具体原因支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Some people don't like making lists because their schedules are often unpredictable. Deadlines can come up suddenly, so making a list might make them feel stressed if they can't complete everything. As a result, they may avoid making lists altogether.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但有语法和用词错误。建议注意冠词和介词的使用，句子结构更自然，且推荐应用时表达更准确。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it everywhere. When I complete a task, I can easily check it off. Paper lists can be lost or forgotten at home. I recommend using the Time Block app for managing tasks.

× No, I never made it, least when I shop because I like doing online shopping and when you select the items you gonna buy there is already a list and you don't need to make an actual list which take more space and with the notebook or paper.

✓ No, I never make it, at least when I shop because I like doing online shopping and when you select the items you are going to buy there is already a list and you don't need to make an actual list which takes more space and uses a notebook or paper.

这里的时间是现在时态，表示习惯性动作，所以动词应使用一般现在时。"never made"是过去时，不符合语境。"gonna"应改为正式的"are going to"。"which take"应改为"which takes"，主语是单数"list"，动词需加-s。

× I'm currently a student now so I don't make this for work but I make this for study. It really work because it remind me my everyday routine and I can take the boxes when I finish projects. This make me confident and feel like everything is under control.

✓ I'm currently a student now so I don't make this for work but I make this for study. It really works because it reminds me of my everyday routine and I can tick the boxes when I finish projects. This makes me confident and feel like everything is under control.

主语是第三人称单数"it"，动词应加-s，故"work"改为"works"，"remind"改为"reminds"，"make"改为"makes"。此外，"remind me my everyday routine"应加介词"of"。"take the boxes"应改为"tick the boxes"，更符合习惯表达。

× I'm a people who don't really like making this so I had to have a say on it.

✓ I'm a person who doesn't really like making this so I have to have a say on it.

"people"是复数，前面用单数冠词"a"不合适，应改为单数"person"。"don't"应改为"doesn't"，因为主语是单数"person"。"had to"改为"have to"，保持时态一致。

× This is because these people don't have a their schedule too flexible because their deadline usually pop out suddenly so if they make a list they can rally complete it and this made them frustrated and eventually don't make this anymore.

✓ This is because these people don't have their schedule too flexible because their deadlines usually pop out suddenly so if they make a list they can't really complete it and this makes them frustrated and eventually they don't make this anymore.

"a their schedule"中冠词"a"多余，应去掉。"deadline"应为复数"deadlines"，与"usually pop out"搭配。"rally"应为"really"。"can rally complete"应为"can't really complete"，语义更通顺。"this made"应为"this makes"，时态保持一致。

× I like making this on my phone because I can carry my everywhere and once I complete the task I can directly take off the box.

✓ I like making this on my phone because I can carry it everywhere and once I complete the task I can directly tick off the box.

"carry my everywhere"中"my"用错，应为宾格代词"it"指代"this"。"take off the box"表达不准确，应为"tick off the box"表示完成任务打勾。

× However, when making with the paper it is easy to get lost and sometimes I need to come home to take it.

✓ However, when making with paper it is easy to get lost and sometimes I need to come home to get it.

"with the paper"中"the"不必要，改为"with paper"更自然。"take it"改为"get it"更符合语境，表示取回。

× I would recommend time block this app.

✓ I would recommend the Time Block app.

"time block this app"表达不清，应改为"the Time Block app"，加冠词并调整词序，表示推荐某个应用。