List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“go shopping”应为“going shopping”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并简洁明了地回答问题。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I find it relaxing to browse and choose items spontaneously.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，“least”应为“a list”，且表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明理由。

例: No, I don't make a list for my work because I am confident I can complete my academic tasks without one.

提案: 回答较为完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富词汇表达。

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because failing to complete all tasks can cause them to feel stressed and pressured.

提案: 回答较好，表达清晰自然。可以尝试使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更地道。

例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone since I always have it with me, which means I don't need to carry extra items like a notebook.

× I'm afraid not, I always unwind myself by go shopping so I don't prefer to list something I should buy.

✓ I'm afraid not, I always unwind myself by going shopping so I don't prefer to list something I should buy.

动词短语中，介词by后面应接动名词形式（动词+ing），而不是动词原形。这里应使用'going'而不是'go'。

× I'm afraid not because I have confidence I can complete the academic tasks perfectly without least.

✓ I'm afraid not because I have confidence I can complete the academic tasks perfectly without a list.

这里的'least'是拼写错误，正确的词是'list'，表示清单。此处应使用名词'list'，而不是'least'。

× From my perspective, some people don't like making a list because if they can't complete all tasks on the list, they will be under pressure and feel stressed.

✓ From my perspective, some people don't like making lists because if they can't complete all tasks on the list, they will be under pressure and feel stressed.

当泛指多个人的习惯时，'making lists'更合适，表示多次制作清单，而不是单数的'a list'。

× I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me, so I don't need to bring extra items like a notebook.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me, so I don't need to bring extra items like a notebook.

此句无语法错误，复数'lists'使用正确。