List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes I do. I usually make a list when I go to shop because I think a list can help me choose some useful things.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
For sure, I often make a list for my work. I think a list can help me save more time and improve my work efficiency, especially when I have many walks to arrange.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Maybe some people don't like making list because it can be time consuming and requires a lot of efforts. For example, they might find it difficult to organize their thinking cleanly.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Yes I do. I prefer to make a list on my phone, especially on memorandum. It can help me improve my work efficiency and help me remember some important things.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体的例子和原因，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a recipe, so I didn't forget anything at the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误（'walks'应为'work'或其他词），且表达不够具体。建议纠正错误，增加具体细节，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks efficiently. For instance, when I have many meetings to schedule, a list ensures I don't miss any appointments.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容较好，但表达稍显简单。建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然且具体。
例: Some people dislike making lists because it can be time-consuming and requires effort. Moreover, they might find it challenging to organize their thoughts clearly, which makes the process frustrating.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中'Yes I do'不符合问题，且表达重复。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并增加具体细节和连接词。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone, especially using the memo app, because it's convenient and helps me remember important tasks more easily.
文法
× Maybe some people don't like making list because it can be time consuming and requires a lot of efforts.
✓ Maybe some people don't like making lists because it can be time consuming and requires a lot of effort.
“list”应为复数形式“lists”，因为这里指的是一般的复数概念。"efforts"通常用不可数名词“effort”表示“努力”，不需要复数形式。
× I usually make a list when I go to shop because I think a list can help me choose some useful things.
✓ I usually make a list when I go shopping because I think a list can help me choose some useful things.
短语“go to shop”应改为“go shopping”，因为“go shopping”是固定搭配，表示去购物。
× I think a list can help me save more time and improve my work efficiency, especially when I have many walks to arrange.
✓ I think a list can help me save more time and improve my work efficiency, especially when I have many tasks to arrange.
“walks”用词不当，应为“tasks”表示“任务”，更符合语境。
× Yes I do. I prefer to make a list on my phone, especially on memorandum.
✓ Yes I do. I prefer to make a list on my phone, especially on the memorandum app.
“memorandum”作为名词不明确，应加定冠词并明确为“memorandum app”，表示备忘录应用程序。
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