List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意动词形式（如'memory'应为'remember'），避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to shop spontaneously. Also, I have a good memory, so I can usually remember what I need. I find making a list a bit restrictive.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如'make a list is very restrict'应为'making a list is very restrictive'。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: No, I usually don't make a list for my work because I trust my ability to complete tasks. Also, sometimes unexpected situations happen, so making a list can feel restrictive.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但表达略显重复。建议减少重复词汇，使用更多连接词如'firstly'和'secondly'，并丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: Well, in my opinion, there are two main reasons. Firstly, some people are confident and believe they can complete their tasks without a list. Secondly, they may not have the habit of making lists regularly.

提案: 回答较好，表达清晰且有逻辑，但有轻微重复（如两次使用'prefer'），建议注意句子简洁和避免重复。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's portable and I can update it anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient.

× No, I don't like making a list when I shop.

✓ No, I don't like to make a list when I shop.

动词like后面可以接动名词或不定式，但在表达习惯或偏好时，使用不定式to do更常见，更符合口语习惯。

× I usually can memory what I need.

✓ I usually can remember what I need.

memory是名词，不能作为动词使用，正确动词是remember。

× And I think making at least when I shop is a little restrictive so I don't like that.

✓ And I think making a list when I shop is a little restrictive, so I don't like that.

短语中缺少名词list，且介词at使用错误，应去掉。

× So I think make a list is very restrict and also in some special occasions such as accidents, umm making a list is a little restrictive.

✓ So I think making a list is very restrictive and also in some special occasions such as accidents, umm making a list is a little restrictive.

动词think后面应接动名词making而非不定式make；restrict是形容词restrictive的误用。

× I think make a list is very restrict and also in some special occasions such as accidents, umm making a list is a little restrictive.

✓ I think making a list is very restrictive and also in some special occasions such as accidents, umm making a list is a little restrictive.

restrict应为形容词restrictive，表示“限制性的”。

× Firstly, I think they are confident. They believe that they can finish their works well without making a list and additionally I think they don't have the habit of making lists.

✓ Firstly, I think they are confident. They believe that they can finish their work well without making a list and additionally I think they don't have the habit of making lists.

work作为不可数名词时不加复数-s，表示工作。

× Right. Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because firstly mobile phone can be carried with me when I'm out and and at the same time you can change your list no matter where and when you are.

✓ Right. Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because firstly mobile phone can be carried with me when I'm out and at the same time you can change your list no matter where and when you are.

句中重复使用了and，应去掉多余的and。

× I will prefer to make on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

动词prefer后面直接接不定式to do，且缺少宾语a list。