List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答基本表达了意思，但有一些语法错误和用词不准确，比如“a approximate list”应为“an approximate list”，“implies buying”应为“impulse buying”。建议注意冠词的使用和词汇的准确性，同时可以用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make an approximate list when I go shopping because I sometimes forget to buy what I need. It helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying. Also, I categorize items by sections of the store to shop more efficiently.

提案: 回答内容清晰，但存在语法错误，如“helps me organized”应为“helps me stay organized”，“productivity increase”应为“productivity increases”。建议注意动词形式和时态的正确使用，同时可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks. I use a digital app to keep track of my work list, which sends me reminders. As a result, my productivity increases and I feel a sense of accomplishment.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但“this making”表达不自然，建议改为“making lists”。此外，可以用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Some individuals perceive making lists as time-consuming. They feel confident in their ability to remember tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to use that time to dive straight into their work.

提案: 回答中“convenient for me to watch it”表达不自然，建议改为“convenient to access”。另外，“making a list on phone”应为“making a list on my phone”。建议注意词汇搭配和冠词的使用。

例: To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient to access. A paper list might get lost or I might forget to bring it when I leave home. So, making a list on my phone is a wise choice for me.

× Yes, I usually make a approximate list when I go shopping because I sometimes forget to buy what I needed and it helps me stay within my budget and avoid implies buying.

✓ Yes, I usually make an approximate list when I go shopping because I sometimes forget to buy what I need and it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound as in 'approximate'. 'Needed' should be 'need' to match the present tense context. 'Implies buying' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'impulse buying', which means buying things without planning. Use 'impulse' as an adjective here.

× Yes, I usually make a approximate list when I go shopping because I sometimes forget to buy what I needed and it helps me stay within my budget and avoid implies buying.

✓ Yes, I usually make an approximate list when I go shopping because I sometimes forget to buy what I need and it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.

The verb 'needed' is in past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'need' is appropriate.

× Yes, I definitely make a list for my work. It helps me organized and focused on my tasks.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list for my work. It helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks.

'Organized' and 'focused' are adjectives describing the subject, but the verb 'helps me' requires the verb 'stay' to connect properly. Without 'stay', the sentence is incomplete.

× I use a digital app to keep track of my work list which sends me reminders. I find that my productivity increase when I follow a list and I feel a sense of accomplishment.

✓ I use a digital app to keep track of my work list which sends me reminders. I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list and I feel a sense of accomplishment.

The subject 'productivity' is singular, so the verb should be 'increases' to agree in present tense.

× Some individuals perceive this making as time consuming.

✓ Some individuals perceive making lists as time consuming.

'This making' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making lists' to clearly indicate the action being referred to.

× To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient for me to watch it.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient for me to check it.

'Watch' is not the correct verb for looking at a list; 'check' or 'view' is more appropriate in this context.

× So making a list on phone is a wise choice for me.

✓ So making a list on my phone is a wise choice for me.

'On phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' to specify whose phone is being referred to.