List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use clear and concise sentences with linking words to improve fluency and coherence. For example, start with a direct answer, then add a reason and an example.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, last week I bought all the ingredients for a new recipe without forgetting anything.

提案: Clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases like 'make less than' or 'warm up for my work'. Use linking words to connect your points logically and provide specific examples to support your answer.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks. For example, I write down my daily assignments so I can stay organized and complete everything on time.

提案: Avoid excessive filler words and repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'while' correctly to connect ideas. Provide more specific reasons or examples to enrich your answer.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily. Others prefer not to make lists because they find it time-consuming, so it depends on personal preference.

提案: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Provide a concise reason and example to support your preference.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists. Since I always carry my phone, it's easier to access and remember my tasks.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I have to go for shopping 'cause uh, it's easy, uh, for searching anything as well as, uh, uh, sometimes we forget.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I have to go shopping because, uh, it's easy to find anything, and sometimes we forget.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' where 'shopping' is a gerund acting as the object of 'go'. Also, 'for searching anything' is incorrect; it should be 'to find anything' because 'easy to' is followed by the base verb form.

× So I always make a list while I do shopping.

✓ So I always make a list while I am shopping.

The phrase 'do shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' or 'am shopping' when describing an ongoing action. Here, 'while I am shopping' correctly uses the present continuous tense with the gerund form.

× So whenever I make less than I remember that work I have to do.

✓ So whenever I make a list, I remember the work I have to do.

The phrase 'make less than' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'make a list'. Also, 'that work I have to do' is acceptable but could be clearer with 'the work I have to do'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and fixes the singular/plural confusion.

× So I think I also warm up for my work like I have to do for next time.

✓ So I think I also warm up for my work, like what I have to do next time.

The phrase 'warm up for my work' is unusual; however, assuming the intended meaning is to prepare, the sentence is rephrased for clarity. 'Have to do for next time' is corrected to 'have to do next time' to remove unnecessary preposition 'for'.

× Well, there are many reasons why some people don't like to make list.

✓ Well, there are many reasons why some people don't like to make lists.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists or lists in general, not a single list.

× Uh, some people have, uh, uh, good memory and, uh, they always remember the things.

✓ Uh, some people have good memories and they always remember things.

The phrase 'good memory' should be plural 'good memories' when referring to people in general. Also, 'the things' is incorrect; it should be 'things' without the definite article because it refers to things in general.

× Uh, while some people don't make a list because they think they can remember easily, so it's their own choice.

✓ While some people don't make a list because they think they can remember easily, it's their own choice.

The conjunction 'while' and 'so' are redundant together. Removing 'so' improves sentence structure. Also, the sentence is a complex sentence and should not start with 'Uh,' which is a filler and can be omitted for clarity.

× Well, I always prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause sometime I forget, uh, to put a paper somewhere.

✓ Well, I always prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I forget to put a paper somewhere.

The adverb 'sometime' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'a piece of paper' or just 'paper' because 'paper' is uncountable.

× So I think it's very difficult, uh, to search the paper.

✓ So I think it's very difficult to find the paper.

The verb 'search' is usually followed by 'for' when used transitively, but here 'find' is more appropriate. Also, 'search the paper' is incorrect; 'find the paper' is the correct collocation.