List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在较多口语填充词（如"umm"、"uh"），影响流畅度。建议减少这些词的使用，回答更简洁自然。同时，回答可以更直接，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need. My mom advised me to do this, and it really helps me stay organized.

提案: 回答较完整，但有语法错误和重复词汇（如"in when I I"），影响表达清晰度。建议注意语法准确，避免重复，同时可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list on my phone when I work or study because it helps me stay efficient and focused, and prevents me from forgetting important tasks.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且有口语填充词。建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的表达，并减少口语填充词。回答应更连贯，逻辑清晰。

例: Some people might not like making lists because they have good memories and don't feel the need. Others might find it too much effort or feel lazy to do it.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和口语填充词，且句子未完整结束。建议注意句子完整性，减少填充词，使用更准确的表达，使回答更自然流畅。

例: I prefer making to-do lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can edit them anytime, anywhere. I don't like using paper lists because they are less flexible.

× I often forget the items that I should buy.

✓ I often forget the item that I should buy.

这里的items是复数，但根据上下文，可能指的是单个物品，需根据具体语境判断。若指多个物品，原句无误。此处可视为无错误。

× So my mom often told me, uh, make a list, uh.

✓ So my mom often tells me, uh, to make a list, uh.

句中描述的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时tells而非过去时told。

× Well actually I always make A to do list on my phone in when I I am working or studying because I think it's a good way to make me stay more efficient and focused and I can avoid forgetting some important things.

✓ Well actually I always make a to-do list on my phone when I am working or studying because I think it's a good way to help me stay more efficient and focused and I can avoid forgetting some important things.

“A to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”，且“to do list”应连字符为“to-do list”。“in when I I am”中“in”多余，应删除。句中“make me stay”表达不准确，应改为“help me stay”。

× Well actually I always make A to do list on my phone in when I I am working or studying because I think it's a good way to make me stay more efficient and focused and I can avoid forgetting some important things.

✓ Well actually I always make a to-do list on my phone when I am working or studying because I think it's a good way to help me stay more efficient and focused and I can avoid forgetting some important things.

“in when”中“in”多余，应删除。

× Well, I think maybe some people have a good memories about anything, but umm, another one may be just a lazy about this thing so they don't want try to make a Lister but I had to need because I often forget something, yeah.

✓ Well, I think maybe some people have good memories about everything, but umm, others may just be lazy about this, so they don't want to try to make a list, but I have to because I often forget something, yeah.

“a good memories”中“memories”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。“another one”用法不当，应改为“others”。“a lazy”应改为“lazy”。“don't want try”缺少不定式“to”。“Lister”应为“list”。“I had to need”表达错误，应为“I have to”。

× Well, I always make A to do list on my phone because I think it's convenient for me and I can, umm, modify it anywhere and anytime. So I don't like, uh, make A to do list, uh, on paper and.

✓ Well, I always make a to-do list on my phone because I think it's convenient for me and I can, umm, modify it anywhere and anytime. So I don't like to make a to-do list on paper.

“A to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”，且“to do list”应连字符为“to-do list”。句尾“and”多余，应删除。