List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use the correct verb tense and avoid repetition. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by removing filler words like 'uh'. For example, say 'I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me collect the items easily.'

例: I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me collect the items easily and saves time.

提案: Be more specific about what kind of lists you make and how they help you. Avoid repeating phrases and incomplete thoughts. For example, say 'Yes, I often make lists at work to keep track of tasks and contact people efficiently.'

例: Yes, I often make lists at work to keep track of tasks and contact people efficiently, which helps me stay organized.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and add a reason. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.'

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally, even though this can lead to forgetting important tasks.

提案: Complete your sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's convenient and easy to update.'

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's convenient and easy to update whenever needed.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I decided to go for shopping because it is the easy way to, uh, easy way to collect the items from the shops.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I decide to go shopping because it is the easy way to collect the items from the shops.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'decided' when referring to a habitual action. Since the action is habitual, the present tense 'decide' should be used. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Removing unnecessary repetition improves clarity.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I decided to go for shopping because it is the easy way to, uh, easy way to collect the items from the shops.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I decide to go shopping because it is the easy way to collect the items from the shops.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct preposition usage is 'go shopping'. This is a fixed expression in English where 'shopping' acts as a verb complement without a preposition.

× Yes, I mostly make a list at my work because when I make a list, it's easy for me to find a, find the people and all.

✓ Yes, I mostly make a list at my work because when I make a list, it's easy for me to find the people and all.

The phrase 'find a, find the people and all' is awkward and unclear. Removing the indefinite article 'a' before 'find the people' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'and all' is informal but acceptable in spoken English.

× I think that that people do not make a any list, then they forget something.

✓ I think that people do not make any list, so they forget something.

The phrase 'a any list' is incorrect because 'any' is used without an article. Also, 'then' is better replaced with 'so' to indicate cause and effect. Removing the repeated 'that' improves sentence clarity.

× I think that that people do not make a any list, then they forget something.

✓ I think that people do not make any list, so they forget something.

The repeated 'that' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, 'then' is better replaced with 'so' to show cause and effect clearly.

× I mostly prefer to make a list on the phone it because I always carry a mobile phone with me so that's why it is easy for me to.

✓ I mostly prefer to make a list on the phone because I always carry a mobile phone with me, so it's easy for me.

The phrase 'on the phone it because' contains an unnecessary pronoun 'it'. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence. Also, adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence flow.