List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，并且避免语法错误，例如应为“I usually make a list when I shop because it makes it clearer what I need to buy.”

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy.

提案: 回答中缺少连贯的句子结构，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子并添加连接词，使表达更自然，例如“I often make a to-do list for my work, and it is very efficient.”

例: I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，例如“Some people don't like making lists because they have never tried it before. However, if they try, they may find it improves their daily work.”

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have never tried it, but I believe it can really improve productivity once they do.

提案: 回答中有口语填充词，表达不够流畅。建议去除多余的“uh”，并使用更自然的表达，例如“I usually make lists on my phone because I have a productive app that helps me remember my schedule. If I use paper, I might forget where I put it.”

例: I usually make lists on my phone because I use a helpful app that reminds me of my tasks. Using paper lists is less convenient since I might lose them.

× Yes, I usually make a list when shop because it is more clearly that what I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it is clearer what I need to buy.

句子中缺少主语“I”，导致时态使用错误。'more clearly' 应改为比较级 'clearer'，因为这里是比较两个状态的清晰度。建议在动词前加上主语，并使用正确的比较级形式。

× I often make A to do list for my work is very efficient.

✓ I often make a to-do list for my work; it is very efficient.

句子中 'A' 应为小写 'a'，且 'to do list' 应为连字符连接的 'to-do list'。此外，句子结构不完整，缺少连接词或分号。建议使用正确的冠词和连字符，并调整句子结构使其完整。

× I often make A to do list for my work is very efficient.

✓ I often make a to-do list for my work; it is very efficient.

原句缺少连接词或标点，导致句子结构不完整。应使用分号或连接词将两个独立分句连接起来。

× I think they just never do the list before if they try some To Do List and if you'll find it's a very improve their tests during the daily work.

✓ I think they have never made a list before. If they try some to-do lists, they will find it greatly improves their tasks during daily work.

原句结构混乱，时态使用不当，且表达不清晰。'never do the list before' 应改为现在完成时 'have never made a list before'，'if you'll find' 应改为 'they will find'，'improve their tests' 应为 'improves their tasks'。建议理清句子结构，使用正确时态和词汇。

× I usually make a list on my phone that I have a very, uh, productive app that can help me, uh, remember some calendar.

✓ I usually make a list on my phone because I have a very productive app that can help me remember my calendar.

原句中 'that' 用法不当，应使用连词 'because' 表示原因，'some calendar' 应为 'my calendar'。建议使用正确的连词和所有格代词。

× Uh, if I make a list on the paper, I may forget where the paper was.

✓ If I make a list on paper, I may forget where the paper is.

'on the paper' 中 'the' 不必要，通常说 'on paper'。'where the paper was' 时态不对，应为现在时 'where the paper is'。建议去掉不必要的冠词并使用正确时态。