List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和犹豫词，直接回答问题并给出具体原因。

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, for important items, I sometimes write a list to avoid forgetting them.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I don't always include many tasks. However, I think making a list is necessary for important things.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达混乱。建议先明确观点，再用简单句子解释原因，避免使用不准确的词汇。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility. They prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a plan.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的语法，清晰表达偏好，并简洁说明原因。

例: I prefer to make my lists on paper because my school does not allow us to bring phones. Therefore, writing on paper is more convenient for me.

× I don't like plan anythings on uh, so I don't like make a list of when I shop.

✓ I don't like planning anything, so I don't like making a list when I shop.

动词后面需要用动名词形式（-ing），如 'like planning' 和 'like making'。此外，'anythings' 是错误的，应该用不可数名词 'anything'。

× I don't like plan anythings on uh, so I don't like make a list of when I shop.

✓ I don't like planning anything, so I don't like making a list when I shop.

'anythings' 是错误的复数形式，'anything' 是不可数代词，不能加复数形式。

× Uh, but uh, uh, in important things. I I I.

✓ But for important things, I do.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语，导致句子不通顺。需要补充完整表达。

× Sometimes I make a list my work, but I think it's unless because I seldom make things busy on my list, but important things is necessary.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I think it's useless because I seldom put busy things on my list, but important things are necessary.

缺少介词 'for'，'unless' 用错，应为 'useless'，'make things busy' 表达不当，应为 'put busy things'，'important things is' 主谓不一致，应为 'important things are'。

× Sometimes I make a list my work, but I think it's unless because I seldom make things busy on my list, but important things is necessary.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I think it's useless because I seldom put busy things on my list, but important things are necessary.

缺少介词 'for'，正确表达应为 'make a list for my work'。

× Sometimes I make a list my work, but I think it's unless because I seldom make things busy on my list, but important things is necessary.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I think it's useless because I seldom put busy things on my list, but important things are necessary.

'unless' 是连词，错误使用，应为形容词 'useless'。

× Sometimes I make a list my work, but I think it's unless because I seldom make things busy on my list, but important things is necessary.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work, but I think it's useless because I seldom put busy things on my list, but important things are necessary.

'important things is' 主谓不一致，'things' 是复数，谓语应为 'are'。

× I think like me I am also don't like make list people because they think they usually break their plane and they have a imagination to they want to do anythings.

✓ I think people like me also don't like making lists because they think they usually break their plans and they have an imagination about what they want to do.

'like' 后面应接动名词 'making'，'make list people' 结构错误，应为 'making lists'。

× I think like me I am also don't like make list people because they think they usually break their plane and they have a imagination to they want to do anythings.

✓ I think people like me also don't like making lists because they think they usually break their plans and they have an imagination about what they want to do.

'list' 应为复数 'lists'，'plane' 应为 'plan'，'anythings' 应为 'anything'。

× I think like me I am also don't like make list people because they think they usually break their plane and they have a imagination to they want to do anythings.

✓ I think people like me also don't like making lists because they think they usually break their plans and they have an imagination about what they want to do.

'a imagination' 错误，'imagination' 是不可数名词，不用冠词。

× I think like me I am also don't like make list people because they think they usually break their plane and they have a imagination to they want to do anythings.

✓ I think people like me also don't like making lists because they think they usually break their plans and they have an imagination about what they want to do.

'have a imagination to' 结构错误，应为 'have an imagination about'。

× I prefer to make my list on my paper because my school don't allow we take phone go to school, so I have to perform make list in my paper it's become.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because my school doesn't allow us to take phones to school, so I have to make my list on paper.

'perform make list' 结构错误，应直接用动词短语 'make my list'。

× I prefer to make my list on my paper because my school don't allow we take phone go to school, so I have to perform make list in my paper it's become.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because my school doesn't allow us to take phones to school, so I have to make my list on paper.

'we' 用错，作为宾语应使用 'us'。

× I prefer to make my list on my paper because my school don't allow we take phone go to school, so I have to perform make list in my paper it's become.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because my school doesn't allow us to take phones to school, so I have to make my list on paper.

'phone' 应为复数 'phones'，表示一般复数。

× I prefer to make my list on my paper because my school don't allow we take phone go to school, so I have to perform make list in my paper it's become.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because my school doesn't allow us to take phones to school, so I have to make my list on paper.

'school' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为 'doesn't' 而非 'don't'。