List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevaplarınızda dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltmeli ve daha doğal ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltarak daha etkili ve akıcı cevaplar vermelisiniz.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I go to the supermarket. It helps me remember all the products I need to buy. Sometimes, when I shop without a list, I tend to forget specific items.

提案: Cümle yapılarınızı daha doğru kullanmalı ve bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, kelime seçimlerinizi geliştirerek daha spesifik ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I usually make lists for my homework and projects because they help me remember all my assignments, especially during busy school days. This way, I don't miss any important deadlines. Making lists keeps me organized and reduces my stress.

提案: Cümlelerinizi daha doğru ve tamamlanmış şekilde kurmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltarak daha net ve anlaşılır cevaplar vermelisiniz. Ayrıca, açıklamalarınızı daha spesifik yapmalısınız.

例: Honestly, I don't understand why some people don't like making lists. For me, making a list helps me remember everything I need to buy or do, even when I go shopping. It keeps me organized and focused.

提案: Cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanmalı ve tekrarları azaltmalısınız. Ayrıca, daha çeşitli kelimeler kullanarak ifadelerinizi zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible than using pen and paper. Since I often don't have a pen with me, using my phone allows me to check my list anytime, which helps me remember everything I need.

× Yes, I usually making shopping list especially when I go to the supermarket.

✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list especially when I go to the supermarket.

The verb 'make' should be in its base form after 'usually' because 'usually' is an adverb of frequency and is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Using 'making' here is incorrect.

× This helps me to remember all products I need to buy from them.

✓ This helps me to remember all the products I need to buy.

The preposition 'from' is unnecessary here because 'buy' already implies obtaining the products. Also, 'the' is needed before 'products' to specify the items.

× Sometimes I forget the uh, specific items uh, getting from them.

✓ Sometimes I forget the specific items I need to get.

The phrase 'getting from them' is incorrect. Instead, use 'I need to get' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my homeworks and the projects because it helps me remember all assignments and projects especially during the school day.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my homework and the projects because it helps me remember all assignments and projects especially during the school day.

'Homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'.

× It prevents me for getting any important items that I need to complete if they have any deadline.

✓ It prevents me from forgetting any important items that I need to complete if they have any deadline.

'Prevent' is followed by 'from' plus the gerund form of the verb. 'For getting' is incorrect; it should be 'from forgetting'.

× Making list keeps me organized and reduce my stress.

✓ Making a list keeps me organized and reduces my stress.

'List' is countable and requires an article 'a' here. Also, the verb 'reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'Making a list'.

× I don't understand why some people not making a list for anything.

✓ I don't understand why some people do not make a list for anything.

After 'do not', the base form of the verb 'make' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'making'.

× It helps me to remember all of things that I need to buy or do.

✓ It helps me to remember all the things that I need to buy or do.

'All of things' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'all the things'.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible than making a list with pen and pencil.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible than making a list with a pen and pencil.

'Prefer' can be followed by either the gerund or the infinitive, but for consistency and clarity, 'prefer to make' is better here. Also, 'pen and pencil' need an article 'a' before them.

× I often don't have pen and pencil with me, so I prefer making a list on my phone when I see the screen.

✓ I often don't have a pen and a pencil with me, so I prefer making a list on my phone when I see the screen.

Countable singular nouns like 'pen' and 'pencil' require the indefinite article 'a' when mentioned for the first time.