List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu word repetition ache. Apnar uttor ke aro natural korte, apni 'I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary things.' moto bolte paren. Apni 'uh' er moto filler word use korben na, ar sentence gulo ke chhoto r clear rakhben.

例: Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary things.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu filler word ache, ar kichu grammar error ache. Apni 'Yes, I usually make a list for my work when I have a lot to do because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I think it works well because it is very useful.' moto bolte paren. Apni linking words use kore sentence gulo ke aro logical korte paren.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work when I have a lot to do because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I think it works well because it is very useful.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache ar kichu sentence incomplete. Apni 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. For example, some lazy people think making lists is a waste of time, but they often forget things when they go shopping.' moto bolte paren. Apni sentence gulo ke complete rakhben ar linking words use korben.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. For example, some lazy people think making lists is a waste of time, but they often forget things when they go shopping.

提案: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu chhoto grammar mistake ache. Apni 'Honestly, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to access. For example, I can quickly add or delete items without worrying about losing the paper where I wrote my list. Also, phone apps often have reminders which help me stay organized and remember important tasks.' moto bolte paren. Apni plural form ar subject-verb agreement e khayal rakhben.

例: Honestly, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to access. For example, I can quickly add or delete items without worrying about losing the paper where I wrote my list. Also, phone apps often have reminders which help me stay organized and remember important tasks.

× Yes, I make list when I go to shop because I I really like to stay organized and making list on shopping helps to uh. Stay organized and buying unnecessary things.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because I really like to stay organized and making a list while shopping helps to stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary things.

The word 'list' is countable and should be preceded by an article 'a' when singular. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form. 'Making list on shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list while shopping'. These corrections ensure proper singular/plural usage and correct verb forms.

× Yes, I usually make a list for of my work when I have to work a lot because umm it helps me to stay organized and focus on my task.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of my work when I have to work a lot because it helps me to stay organized and focus on my tasks.

The phrase 'make a list for of my work' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list of my work'. Also, 'focus on my task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks. These corrections address singular/plural issues and preposition use.

× Some people don't like to make list because they find it very boring or time taking.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they find it very boring or time-consuming.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is appropriate here. Also, 'time taking' is not correct; the correct adjective is 'time-consuming'. This correction fixes pluralization and adjective usage.

× For example lazy people.

✓ For example, lazy people.

This is a sentence fragment without a verb, but since it is an example phrase, adding a comma after 'For example' improves clarity. However, no singular/plural issue here, so no major correction needed.

× They think that making list is a waste of time but they forget when they there goes to the shop.

✓ They think that making lists is a waste of time but they forget when they go to the shop.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to use the plural form correctly. Also, 'they there goes to the shop' is incorrect; it should be 'they go to the shop'. This fixes singular/plural and verb form errors.

× Honestly, I prefer to make list on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to access.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to access.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to correctly use the plural form. This correction addresses the singular/plural issue.

× For example, I can quickly add or delete item without worrying about losing the paper where I wrote my list.

✓ For example, I can quickly add or delete items without worrying about losing the paper where I wrote my list.

'Item' should be plural 'items' because multiple items can be added or deleted. This fixes the singular/plural issue.

× Also, phone apps often have reminders which helps me stay organized and remember important task.

✓ Also, phone apps often have reminders which help me stay organized and remember important tasks.

'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject 'reminders'. 'Important task' should be plural 'important tasks'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and singular/plural issues.